That was cute and well in-character. :)

I do suggest fixing some small punctuation errors. (I'm probably the only one who noticed xD)

aaw that was cute

That was adorable beyond reason, whilst completely in character. Great work.

This was wonderfully sweet. Despite Spike's attempts to the contrary, I thought he had a soft spot for Ed. And Ed, meanwhile, was very direct when she needed to be. This is a lovely little story!

AW! How cute. in character and touchingly heartfelt moment. Thanks for writting!

Why is Ed such a damn cool character? If this was a boxing match, you didn't just KO the other boxer, you completely killed him! This was awesome. Good job.

WARGH!Too...much...fluff...*drowns*

Nah...Just kidding...that was great

O_O She's thirteen? Cool.

This was cuu-uute! Really, really great. I'd like to see more!

Lou

I LOVE ED!

i loved this so much. really touching and really sweet to the bone. wish there was more though, but i think this chapter made a good enough impact on its own.

Cute..

Aw, thats sweet without being fluffy! Which would be a bit weird since Ed's only 13... but I really like it! You got Ed-chan's personality dead on! YAY! *does the Ed dance* I really like it, keep writing!

that was good... i would so totally love it if you continued...

Aw. Very nice. and in character

Great stuff! It's nice to see Ed and Spike friendly in a fic! I think you kept character good! Ed seemed so like herself, with her speech the same and everything!

Write more, I can't get enough! ;

Oh! And Happy New Years! :)