 Hivedragon 2009-10-31 . chapter 1Love it, its so cute. |
 things24 2009-08-21 . chapter 1This is so sweet. There are hardly any Zuko/Jin stories. |
 HappyGoMe 2009-08-18 . chapter 1really pretty |
 SpyralHax 2009-06-28 . chapter 1Very subdued, melancholy little piece here. Nicely written, if a bit on the negative side for my tastes. |
 Mariagoner 2009-06-22 . chapter 1I've never really thought of this pairing before but you write it beautifully and have it make *sense.* Terrific job! |
 Escajunkie 2009-05-15 . chapter 1Very very well done. Short. Sweet. Complete. It gives enough detail of events to let you know what is happening, but leaves enough out to let your mind wonder what could be hidden in the blanks. |
 Lucrezia6565 2009-05-11 . chapter 1This was just beautiful.
I love how you wrote Jin, and Zuko too.
I think that the most poignant part is where Jin asks Zuko to tell her his real name, and he answers that it's Li now.
*sigh* lovely and sad :>) |
 FireChildSlytherin5 2009-04-25 . chapter 1This is a one-shot?
Anyway, love it anyway. There are so few Zuko/Jin fics which is sad. |
 The One Called Demetra 2009-04-23 . chapter 1This so needs more reviews, so here I am, reviewing. What can I say? It was awesome, natural, well written, and anything else you care to name, and I especially love the ambiguous ending.
-D |
 Hinodeh 2009-04-23 . chapter 1Such a great AU for my Avatar OTP.
I love how you characterize Jin: her practical nature, her passion, how she accepts who Zuko is yet knows that she should feel guilty, her thirst for something unusual despite the fact that she should aim for "safe".
And Zuko telling her that he is Li now said more than a paragraph of inner thoughts and explanations.
Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it very much. |
 claymade 2009-04-04 . chapter 1Very sad and touching. A fascinating little what-if. Romantic, yet more than just romance. Awesome stuff. |
 RedBrunja 2009-04-02 . chapter 1Awesome. |
 InformalSpoofer 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Wow, this is absolutely gorgeous. I love how you write Jin, and how their relationship just sort of...goes. Naturally. And unstable, but beautiful. Lovely work. |
 AvocadoLove 2009-03-27 . chapter 1Oh God I just... this was so sweet and so romantic, and MAN I love how you write Jin. Gah. Now this is a pairing I can get behind! I think I love the 'Burning' part the most where Jin is accepting what Zuko is and Zuko... he seems to want to be the man that would be good for her. this was so nice. |