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GirlWaterShaman 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abusecool. This was good. :)
Kirai-Ninja 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abusethis story is great
Shiguya Retomasi 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseExcuse me if I can't be super sugary enthusiastic about this, but it definetly is worth noting. I was a bit put off at how short this one-shot is; 'under 10 words sounds close to being a drabble' crossed my mind, but the summary caught my attention so I read it. For being so short, it still accomplished a lot; again, like my last review the low descriptiveness on the narrators part was a bit of a letdown, but it is Ash's Charizard speaking; thick skulled dragons don't take time to think heavily. But...the way he started to finally grow up was intersting; shaking off the arrogant attitude from being the top dragon, and beginning to expand his own true bounds. In short, I liked it quite a bit and plan on digging through your other Pokemon stories with high hopes.
Anicrazy 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best one-shot I have ever read, and not just in the Pokemon section. I just have to say that you are a very talented author with lots of potential and the ability to capture emotions and feelings flawlessly.
Azure Ghidorah 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is pretty good, considering that I like dragons and Charizard, But alas I never saw that episode which this is based on.
Cevan-The-Scyther-Human-Hyb... 2004-12-28 ch 1,	abuseVery nice... I'm surprised I didn't read this before. Then again, being occupied with my own writings is something I need to change. In the case of Charizard, as well as everyone else and myself, 'earning respect' is actually 'learning respect.' You're just one letter short. Hmm... sounds like a quote I'll have to put in a story of mine later. Anyways, a good short piece. I'll have to look into your other stories.
Threehorn 2003-11-10 ch 1,	abuseI just read this fic and it is great! I never seen such greatness in one chapter. I have to admit you are one great author.
Naya Zephronic 2003-05-17 ch 1,	abusewell that was intereasting to say the least.
TheDudeGuy72 2003-02-01 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely done. It shows how it really felt about Ash, and how hard life can be at times. Keep up the good work
StellarWind 2002-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent work there. Glad to see more Pokemon and Dragon fans. ^_^ Just one small comment, I think it was Charisific Valley and not Charizitic Valley. But I won't be petty. It's still VERY nicely written, and Ash's Charizard is written very believably. Keep up the great work! ^^
Ein 2002-08-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou really captured Charizard's personality very well. Nice job.
Poke Actor 2002-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThat is a nicely done fic on a Pokemon's point of view. With philosophies, too!
Dranar Silverscale 2002-04-23 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is really good. Thanks for reminging me why I liked Charizard so much. It's nice to see a story where he gets taken down a peg, unlike most of the other ones I've read, where he's arrogant to the point of stupidity. Keep it up!
Alex Warlorn 2002-01-01 ch 1,	abuseI have to say I like this a lot better than Farla's POV on this story where ever pokemon that Ash releases or gives away hates him. After they’d fished me out of the lake, I'm surprised he didn't die "Now you’re ready to try them blindfolded with both hands tied behind your back." He said sternly. He deserves to have his ego smacked if he actully said that to the elder charizard After Charizard's endless boosting (much like Ash) it was good Charizard was the one who got the reality check for once, much like Ash got from AJ that one time and again during the Grass Pokemon tornament, Anyway, it's intresting to note that Charizard lasted a lot longer than any of the other pokemon did against Molly's dream creations (and Entei was the strongest of the lot, that says just how much Charizard had improved), much like that time he challenged Mewtwo's cloned Charizard
Sailor Epyon 2001-12-14 ch 1,	abuseCool story. I love how you go in detail about what Charizard more than likely had to go through. I hope he reunites with Ash someday for good. (He did for a little while in Pokemon 3!!!) Anyway, good job!!! ^_^

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