Just imagine a hot evan rachel wood with EE's boobs (if lizzy's are DD) walking around picking her nose all the time.

*MIND BLOWN*

don't make out with kelly if she really eats her boogers.

oh god stan and wendy broke up for OC's NO

the break up makes me want to do a bit more homework and come back for more, 10am 12 hours more to stay up.

I like being called hot- it's never been an insult, more of a funny ass complement.

and kelly you dumbass, maybe KENNYS the dumbass, long enough with the same chick and you get bored as fuck.

and hell I was slightly turned on at lizzy's description in the shower. john you mary sue you. all the hot chicks want you =p

OMG I CAN LOG INTO *squee*

this is fascinating ass chapter, I love trivia and the presidents blew my mind, and I want to watch saw and other horror movies now. HER NAMES AMANDA!

*spaz*

OHMAHGOD.

The story is...FINISHED.

Oh, what a fabulous story it was :) I've loved reading every single one of these chapters, it was pretty f*cking excellent. Like, seriously. EXCELLENCE. John is the most awesome guy-OC EVER. EVER.

Oh, and don't worry about not putting in enough Crucy. Actually, there was more than enough, which is AWESOME.

You handle every character carefully, and their personalities are spot-on. You really are a brilliant writer :)

Dude, I've been keeping up with this since Chapter 1, and I have to say, the whole thing's pretty damn awesome. Sorry bout, in your own words, "dissappearing into nothingness" but I've been really busy. I apologize. And don't worry, Kurt's moments were good, especially Chapter... 19, i think it was? Great stuff, and I look forward to hearing more from you in the future.

You do know this is probably one of the very few oc stories that ACTUALLY got finished (other one I can remember is I love Lucy). So congrats on that! -gives you interwebz cookie- I feel appreciated you took the time to include Ivy in this(NOT CRAPPY STFU JOHN) story. I liked helping you write it whenever I could I feel I didn't contribute to helping you very much though and for that I apologize. Loved the Kyvy parts especially the one in this chapter.

...now it's over...After reading the Kyvy moment in this chapter and knowing it's ending makes me cry...probably because I'm also listening to So Close by Jon McLaughlin which usually always makes me cry don't ask why.

Kudos to an amazing story...You may think it was crappy but to me I thought it was an amazing masterpiece, (all of your work is though.) It will always be remembered.

(W00T FOR LONGEST REVIEW EVER IN CARSEN HISTORY BTW!)

AW man another good story now has came to a close. I've enjoyed this story so much I don't even think you could imagine how much it saddens me that its completed.

John was the very first male OC I have came in contact with and despite how much you call him a Gary-Stu , I just can't see that. John was and still is awesome to the freakin max.

John made enemies with both non canon and canon SP characters. He wasn't striving to make friends 'we' the OC characters just happened to blend into your lovely story and the friendship grew. You are one of the very few OC authors that have their character fight verbally with both OC's and Canon people and that's the most realistic thing ever . That's what makes John a solid OC character he has both flaws and gifts to his personality...he is someone we could relate to.

You did an awesome job on Kimberly , you kept her in character in the story and I'm both proud and flattered that you accepted her into your story. I hope to see more fics from you because your such a great writer.

Aw, thanks, John x] And you're welcome. It's sad that this story has finally come to a close, we've all come so far! In the story, of course xD

good job dude

Man my character is a BITCH!

Hehe, the fatass's death reloaded. Sweet. Hope Ivy gets what's coming to her :D

I love it so far, love the horror cross overs, ivy always crys when I rp with her but I like sadness. I want a bebe in highschool story, maybe I'll write it. that will be # 12 planned?

Loved this one! Cartman really got what was coming to him, at long last. I had no idea Mole was on the TV in "Two Guys Naked in a Hot Tub"
...ima gonna go watch it tonight xD

TTYL

Heck yeah...thank you. Everything in this chapter was spot on. I'm glade John's gonna kick some @ss...and that @ss happens to be Cartman.

Damn you John not another cliffie! D:


good job oh and btw I lost the game :(