Well done! I especially liked Usagi's altruistic taking over the bullet for Hana, and your portrayal of the relationship between her and Usagi.

Sometimes I think Usagi is too good for her own good. And bittersweet ,moment between Rei and her mom.

it was wonderful. i really love the end with Rei. It's very tender and sad. gReat job!

a sole girl able to stop 5 sailor senshi? Hana is an heroine! great job!

I love the way all your stories intertwine. Natsumi's little cameo is awesome, as is the continueing bits of information. This series shows their lives, not just snips of them.

"and then mercury used her powers to ice hana's feet and hands and stuff... just a little. not enough to kill her. and sailor moon become free"

or something. but that's just me. ha.

i bet you'd come up with something more interesting :D I'm loving how you wrote this chapter :D loving the interaction between the kid and Moon, contrasted with Hana and Moon :D

Wonderful

You think Sailor Moon could of use the Teir before that happen?

i bet she will shoot the yakusa first. Great job!

Vigilante Justice,reminds of the punisher because in the marvel comic books the punisher is also a vigilante.

keep up the work.

this an amzing fanfiction story.

GReat job!

This was a great story. I hope you conitue with it. Hope to see a update soon.

Hana is shuch a character! Quite lively and a letal weapon. GReat job!

Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next. I always love your stories.

well I feel bad for Rei, can't say I didn't see it coming and really can't blame her for not taking another chance being who she is and all...still I wish it could have worked out

but her character is hard, i still haven't gotten her together with who I want yet in my own story LOL

and poor Serena...always getting into trouble.
Anyway job well done, I really am enjoying this story