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fred
2009-12-30 . chapter 4
hello! please! I'm waiting for the next chapter for so long! I really want to read your fanfic and know what's gonna happen to my Hyoga!
aresa
2009-10-05 . chapter 4
you're not making it easier for hyoga, do you?
I wonder how it's going to turn out? what will happen to him?
i'll wait to see chapter 5 ;)
ahh my poor swan~
Fred
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
Hello! Please!It's too hard to wait for the next chapter! I do really enjoy reading this story and the first part too so I'm waiting for the next fantastic time I'll see chapter 5 on my PC!

Fred
subaru1999
2009-09-17 . chapter 4
yay another chapter! poor hyoga, hope the others find him soon! cant wait to see what happens next!!
susan
2009-09-10 . chapter 4
this story is so good!
please keep writing I like to know what's next for hyoga.
I know his friends & brother saints would never abandon him .
please update soon =) =) =P
Pokemonlovers
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
Poor Hyoga, even he is great hero for Shun. But I can't imagine what he looks like at this fic. Let's see, brown-short hair? That doesn't suit him after all, am I right?

Anyway I want this fic to be update soon. See ya.^^
aresa
2009-09-06 . chapter 3
Poor Hyoga, why you made him suffer? Please continue soon! =)
I read Price of Friendship years ago, I´m happy to read this sequel.
kaila
2009-08-07 . chapter 3
I was anxiously waiting for this update. Love this fic!!
Fred
2009-08-01 . chapter 2
Hello, i just finish reading "price of friend and price of trust" and i'm waiting for the next chater... It's really superb, a great fanfic one of my favorite! You have a new fan! Please, hurry up with the third chapter!
Fire-Chan9490
2009-03-31 . chapter 2
OUCH. Those words HURT. She had better not be acting like that really, or I will have to shoot something. Hell to pay, indeed... Update soon?

Ah, about grammar, you seem to have a lot of extra commas here and there, especially after the word and, but it's not anything majorly annoying.
Smily
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
How dares Athena?!?! Poor Hyoga! Yet the others have some brain, luckily.
anyway I really like these 2 chaps but now I'm very "in waiting" for the nexts!! I know, I'm stressing u, sorry... but I really want know how it go on! Hope to see soon the next chap :P bye
MimiYamatoForever
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
Poor Hyoga. Saori really portraied herself like when she was a kid. A spoiled brat. Great chapter. Very well written. I hope Hyoga will be alright.
subaru1999
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
What a crazy chapter!! (crazy as in god crazy).. Poor Hyoga!! Keep up the good work!
Allpheratz
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
WA ! Saori was very cruel with Hyoga. As the saints said, was punishment enough to have lost a part of his soul, now Saori denied his family. The Bronze Saints have never done the will of Saori so I doubt that deny they seeing Hyoga work much.

I ask How you handle the situation of Hyoga? Without cosmo What you got for him? I'm excited to know the multiple scenarios of what might happen

WA! Saori fue muy cruel con Hyoga. Como dijeron los santos, fue bastante castigo haber perdido una parte de su alma, ahora Saori le niega su familia. Los santos de Bronce nunca han hecho la voluntad de Saori por lo que dudo que negarles ver a Hyoga funcione mucho.

Me pregunto ¿cómo manejaras la situación de Hyoga? Sin cosmo ¿que le tienes deparado? Me emociona saber las múltiples hipótesis de lo que puede ocurrir
aresa
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
wah you have no idea how long i waited for this sequel ^_^ please be gentle with Hyoga, he doesn´t deserve to suffer so much. I´m really happy. I´ll wait patiently for the second chapter...and more and more ;)
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