Love this line! "We’re not family, I’m affectionately saying hell no, and why should I feel guilty?"

Can't wait for the dinner party! Fun! :)

oh please, write more. this is so cool!

I'm really enjoying this! But I see that you haven't updated in some time. Are you planning to continue? I really hope so!

'I would like for this situation to become tense and weird now, thank you.' HAHA! 'The great eggshell in the sky.' LOVE IT! You're a great writer. How is this your only story? More, PRONTO! :)

I love your writing! Very clever, very fun. Great story!

Please, please keep on writing this fic! I can't wait to see more, it's so rare that you find good Emma fics on here! ^__^

Hehehe, it gets better each chapter :D and the chicken thing was very cute ^__^

I must say, I'm enjoying this so far, I hope you continue in the future :D The paragraphs are a bit close together, normally, just to ease reading, I prefer having much shorter paragraphs, which takes up more room, but is easier on the eyes. Nothing wrong with your writing, however :D

I'm really enjoying it so far. Emma has always been such a favourite of mine. I just love the character and you know Mr Knightley. I think it's a fantastic start. You really established Geoff-Emma dynamic and just Emma's personality in general. Eager to see how this progresses.

I like it- you've captured the feel of Emma really well. But why are the chapters so short? Add more! :)And maybe this is just me, but the characterization seems a bit wanting. It is just the first couple of chapters. Please post more soon!

this is a really cute update of Emma. I can't wait to read more!

'I would like for this situation to become tense and weird now, thank you.'

seriously one of the best lines ever

Emma has always been my fav JA & I love reading modern takes so interested to see where this goes. It's off to a good, fun start - keep it up!

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