so sad. i have tears in my eyes. '[

Sad, but cute. Awesome combination :')

wow. holy sh*t, this is amazing. please right more house of night ff! This is the best one I have read so far! Love it!

kate

u should make aq continuation of this one-shot of her as a red fledgeling and she and stevie rae become evil bffs then aphrodite saves them. :)

YES they had cell phones!Godess such a loveable fanfic

aw no! I love many of your stories hun but this is just...amazing! Poor Z! aw and house of night has got 2 be one of my fave series' love it - i say u shud look more into the sadder area of fantasy like this - oddly enuf it suits ur style

ME IS CRYING! [

but i like it :)

wow that was really god u shoukld continue it where she comes back to live as a read fleding

Beautiful. Really powerful. I feel really sorry for Damien and Erik and I think you wrote this wonderfully. This would totally be how I would imagine Z's death scene if she rejected the change. I liked how she didn't want Damien to get anyone. This was very touching. Thanks for sharing.

Paula

realli gud:D

poor zoey...

but then again main characters dont die...(usually)

wonder if erik and zoey get together in the end... (probably)

i havent read untamed and hunted yet...

anyway...

realli gud:D

That is so sad. I loved this but I didn't really want Zoey to die.

I HATE YOU! You made me cry with, like 600 words! Seriously though, amazing! I dont know why - im not an emo or anything - but i really like the ones where she rejects the change. Freaky. I like th emotion-ness in it, 5 outta 5 stars. Once again - Im not an emo, i just like it when he forgives her when its too late. Dont think Im weird lmao. Im babbling again. Anyways, its amazing and IT MADE ME CRY! Lol.

lots of love (and tears) lauraa x xx x x x

Awesome! Not enough people in the world let their characters die. But whe they do, they do so with immense skill. And this fic is exibit a.

Wow. This was actually really touching, very realistic. I enjoyed it a lot, but the grammar sometimes threw me off. Would I be able to correct this for you? I'm being serious- it would make the reading a lot more enjoyable for others, and I'm sure this would get more hits if the title/tagline were written better.

I'm honestly not nitpicking, I'm just sad that this hasn't gotten more coverage.

very well writen, i Applaud you. sad, but incredibly well worded.