More? Please more! I want Connor's family to find out the truth. Very good, good stlye. Can we please have more!

I adore this book! Keep up the good work, your interpretation of the ending is so sweet!

This was very nicely done! A few typo's but really nice dialog and good characters. It was a satisfying chapter to read and good fun for fans of the story. Please continue!

You changed a lot, but I often imagined a more dramatic ending. Well, what are you waiting for, update!

I think it's fantastic! I can't wait to see what else you do with this. I just finished reading Airman a few weeks ago and loved it, but I've also been thinking about what conversations Conor might have had with his parents. How much would he tell them about Little Saltee? Would his father and he share their versions of the firework-laden baloons? How would the family begin to heal? Thanks for setting out to fill in the gaps!

Good ! !

D.Z.Z.S