Love, love, love it!

Can you say 'hot'? Yes... yes you can. I can. And I am! HOTT!

:D Thanks for writing this! I just finished the anime and the lack of romance or anything... hott... really annoyed me ^_^ Thank you~

Not my cup of tea (regarding the pairing) but better than Luke x Tear in my opinion since Luke is a whiny ** D:

Jade is not an easy character to write about, so I hear, but you did him justice.

Good work!

Aw... too bad this is only a one-shot.

I enjoy rare pairings better than canon or common ones since pairings like these tend to get ignored; which is why I don't visit this site as much as I use to given a lot of writers disappoint.

Anyway, good job with the characterization!

C'mon, write another one-shot on this pair!

D: Decent written fanfics like this on these two together is EXTREMELY rare to come across since almost everyone focuses on the common or canon pairs and never thinks OUTSIDE the box.

Before, I refused to stare at anything that wasn't LukexTear or AschxNatalia, because I believed all the other couples weren't worth looking at. But... Jade is my favorite character, and he doesn't deserve to be alone! So, I openly clicked on your story... and now, JADEXTEAR IS THE BEST COUPLE TO EVER EXIST! Sheesh you did so well with this, I could feel Jade's breath on my neck (Huh, good feelings...)!! You instantly got me sucked in from the minute Jade sounded seductive! It was amazing!! I bow down to you...


Iceclaw14

WHOA!!That was so good.Love it love it!So totally cool.

I'm a die hard Jade x Tear fan (one of the precious few), and the fact that I got to read such a well written fanfic of them - humorous, IC, yet somehow a bit sensual - was a great joy altogether. Tone, scenario, punctation - all of these were awesome. Even if you primarily like another pairing, it would truly be great to see another of these written from you.

Again, great story, a few mistakes, but nothing that detracted from the good experience. Hope to see more from you!

Never imagined these two being in a relationship XD

This one-shot was pretty cool and I wish there was another chapter.

I wish there were a sequel or second chapter to this!

:D Would of been nice to see the two shower together LOL but that's just me being a pervert is all.

You wrote Jade very well in here. I normally prefer yaoi over het but I do have a soft spot for rare couples since those type of pairings are usually the ones that get neglected for boring canon pairings.

If you do write another ^.~ rate it M. I've only read one "lemon" on this pairing and it was actually disappointing since Tear was portrayed as a drunken easy **.

I was pointed here by Lilac Phoenix, since she knows I'm a Jade x Tear fan and I'm happy I read this one-shot of yours.

Although there was few mistakes in here, this one-shot was very entertaining.

You should write another since your one of the few brave writers out here that does this couple justice =)

Never heard of this couple... but it's oddly appealing to me for reasons I can't explain.

I enjoyed the way you wrote them and I hope you do another one-shot on them.

Oh please oh please write another on this pair! @_@ This couple is so rare and needs more love!

Even though most ppl frown at the idea of Jade x Tear together because "OMG HE'S TOO OLD!!" ^_~ I like it and I enjoyed this one-shot of yours plenty.

I wish there was more decent stories on this couple since rare pairings tend to be something I fancy more than canon ones... but most ppl only want to see Tear with Luke.

Neither character seemed OOC in here which is good nor did I spot a whole lot of grammar mistakes either. So I applaud you for that.

The only mistake that I remember that stood out to me was this line here: Cloud he perhaps sense her apprehension?

This story is really cute! I too am very much a die hard LukexTear fan but with stories as well-written as these, I can't help but read it.

Job Well Done! Love it to bits.

ps: I read your poll on as to what story would you want us, the readers, would want you to write next.

It's not one of the choices, but if it's all right with you, can you please write an AschXTear story? There are not a lot of these in the section. I can understand if you refuse, it is, after all, a pretty ironic pairing.

Anyways hope to see more stories from you!

Keep Writing
-Eucharion