Love this story! you should definately continue this! :D

I love this story! Emily is a fireball!

Great story! I love how much Patrick reminds me of Ben in this story! Please update asap!

*laughs* Thank you for the dedication. :D This was a lovely chapter. I love that they're going on the treasure hunt at last. That was mean of Patrick to pretend to be caught in quicksand, but hilarious, too. Of course, you know what I'm going to say next, right?

More, please?

AH! I cannot tell you how many times I had to stop and literally laugh out loud reading this! The image of Emily beating Patrick over the head with a branch after he's tricked her was just too much fun!

OMG, I flippin' love this! Please update soon!

Yay! They're getting somewhere! I love that they haven't jumped into bed yet, but I'm waiting eagerly for that. *wink* I love how we can see bits of Ben in both of them. So cool! Thank you very much for sharing this with us and please write more soon. I want to know what happens next with them!

I love this story so much! I want more! LOL

SQUEE! *flail* This is absolutely fantastic! You have their personalities perfect! I love that she yelled at him for pretty much saving her life. *snicker* Just means the sex will be fantastic when they finally get around to it. *smirk* BRAVO!

More, please?

Oh, this is adorable. I just love it and I can't wait to read more!

Oh, my God, I LOVE this! I just spent the last few minutes laughing out loud and I can't wait to read the rest of this!

BRAVO!

P.S. Thank you so much for your kind reviews of my work and Jestana's on "The Greatest Treasure of All". Be sure to read the sequel, "A Treasured Legacy" on Jestana's profile!

OMG OMG! I love this! It's so cute and soo them! I hope you keep updating!

WOW! I never thought of the fact of Ben's parents being two crazy teenagers in love. That was really good and funny. It gives me a new perspective on them. Inever pictured uptightish Emily from the movie as being like that, but this was great! I look forward to reading more! :)