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Kreative Kerri
2009-07-30 . chapter 5
This is very in character for Frank and Margaret; life would be eaiser without Hawk but no fun. As for him being missing in action, interesting.
Kreative Kerri
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
This is shaping up to be very interesting, always awesome when someone takes time to create original characters.
Meatball Surgeons
2009-07-26 . chapter 14
I found this story after I happened upon POW and went through it in one sitting. Man, was Frank ever terrible in this story, and I'm surprised charges weren't brought up, for deliberately neglecting a patient as a way of squaring a personal vindetta is criminal! I sure am glad Hawkeye was all right in the end and that he and Belle are forming a close friendship. Excellent story, and I can't wait to read more of POW!
Hawk's-GaL4077
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
omg thanks so much for the special recognition!youre so welcome,i love this story!and don't worry...ill be there for the sequel! ~&SMG&~<3 (susie)
beahawk
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
Loved this chapter and the way Belle stood up to Margaret. You did the right thing in having Margaret apologize as well because however much she disliked Hawkeye's attitude she would not have condoned anything as bad as Frank's actions.
I especially loved the ending where Belle and Hawkeye were lying under the stars.
Thanks for the mention at the end :-)
Look forward to the sequal although I don't think I have ever heard Hawkeye call any girl "Lovely' before. :-)
Lady Nightwisp
2009-07-12 . chapter 14
Nice ending! I can't wait for the sequel:)
I don't mind you using the idea of thanking reviewers by name. I got the idea from other stories too(no clue which ones though)
Colored Glass
2009-07-12 . chapter 14
I loved it. Especially how you didn't let on until a couple chapters later that the "disinfectant" was distilled water. And Frank's splinter excuse was perfectly in-character... "I don't know where that wood's been!" Also, I liked how Margaret didn't know about Frank's sabotaging until the end, because they're usually 'in cahoots' with each other.
Though, whilst the story was lovely, maybe add a little more detail?
Oh, please write another story soon... I really like Belle Winifred.
maximom4077
2009-07-11 . chapter 14
I'm sorry to see this story end. It was nice to see Henry back even though he was a little clueless as usual. Glad to see that Belle spoke up and Margaret did the write thing. Can't wait for the sequel. Nice work. :)
beahawk
2009-07-06 . chapter 13
I hope when Hawk gets stronger that he gets his own back on Ferret Face - big time! Great idea with the photos and letters :-D
Hawk's-GaL4077
2009-07-05 . chapter 13
OMG,FINALLY! Frank gave in,the bowtruckle that he is!!lol
Good,short chapter,can't wait for more!
E>~&SMG&~<3
Lady Nightwisp
2009-07-05 . chapter 13
Yeah! The plan worked!
Great chapter:)
maximom4077
2009-07-04 . chapter 12
Sorry I didn't review this. Keep up the good work!
maximom4077
2009-07-04 . chapter 13
Margaret would be so ticked off if she read those letters! Belle and Trapper were smart to use those as ammo. Hope Hawkeye gets to feeling better soon. With those two teaming up against Frank he should be. Love your story. :)
Texas Bluebonnet
2009-06-28 . chapter 12
Frank is working overtime at being a menace. Hope Belle can come up with something to counteract his plans.
Lady Nightwisp
2009-06-28 . chapter 12
What's the plan? I bet it has something to do with the box of pictures Belle found. Great Chapter:)
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