this was so cute! i thought the same thing and u totally nailed it on what i thought happened when her name appeared in the book!

i love it

You know, I noticed that she was mentioned in the acknowledgement page of his book, and I kind of thought about something like this when I read it. I'm happy to see it brought to life - you did a wonderful job writing this!

"Again, most people wouldn’t notice, but it would only take one person..." and that would be you P

I really enjoyed this, and I loved how her name was in it. Yeah, you rock for writing this.

Jodi

This was a really sweet one-shot. I like that he wanted to include her and how he had to bury her in the middle of the paragraph because she didn't want to stand out, but he wanted it to be in like huge print and bolded and underlined. He just wanted her and it's sad that he couldn't acknowledge her the way he wanted, but this one was really sweet, I liked it.

Cute! I hope his next book will have an inside look af their relationship... lol