This is my favorite of your fics right after BKP!
awesome

I was thinking about taking my chances with Jashin...

it was the most disturbing story i ever read btw it had a horrible ending

my god, I love this song!

Kinda why I'm here, reviewing. I noticed it!

ooh. Tenten sounds too sexy-adorable to resist.

That means you don't hate NejiTen enough to not write any, huh?

Definitely gift wrapped Uchiha. :D

Thanks^^ It was so-so-naughty-make-you-drool-good XD (Ok seriously what was up with that?) Lol Konoha boys are such pervs and I loved how you had TenTen.


I vote for BOTH!

Yay! Stitch is a good girl!^^

hm. three things for the sake of concrit.

one: poles are spelled with an e. (okay, i admit, sort of anal of me, but hey, it's advice.)

two: the repeating thing that you do, (e.i. "loud-loud-loud-loud-damn-its-so-make-your-ears-bleed-loud noise.") yeah, it's not working.

three: after spending years together in the academy, then as a team, don't you think neji would've recognized tenten in an instant, especially if her hair was in those buns, which her signature hairstyle?

now, it is not exactly my intention to make you think im flaming you, because, like i said, this is concrit. i hope you know what that is. since you're a pretty good author judging by this fanfic, i say you do.

now, sasuke wrapped up, you say? hm.

I know you love me. I'm just special like that. XD

HAHA, HYPHENS! YOU MAKE MY LIFE!

And you stole the ripping-out-of-Sasuke's-spine. Forget making my life, you're my GOD. And Itachi could SO be gay. Face it. I love ItaHan as much as you do... but... XD I can SO see him gay.

Wow, Sasu-chan got turned on! XD And Neji's a dirty little whore!

Hm, I dunno... Why not combine the two ideas? *evil little smirk*