The last line made me laugh. XD The first thing I thought of was Death Note. I loved the second person point of view. I've never seen a story like that before.

This was so sweet! C:
Aww.

Oh my gosh. I'm actually crying after reading this. And I don't know why because this isn't a sad fic, it's a beautiful and happy and sweet and romantic one, but maybe it's because I finished R2 yesterday and the horrible reality of Lelouch's fate is still affecting me. But even so, I cannot describe how much I love this fic. It is perfect down to the letter on Lelouch's personality, from his silent thoughtfulness to his inability to admit to Kallen that she is, in fact, his most precious person aside from being his main fighter. And the way you write both Lulu and Kallen is incredible, you are so talented! Ok I'm done gushing about this fic but it is truly amazing. If all Kalulu stories were like yours the world would be a better place. XD

Okay. You're going to be in my faves list already. I've read some LelouchKallen by you and I loved them, so... Yeah. :D

Sweet.

--CandyTenshi

This is adorable. D8 And so like Kallen. So, so like Kallen. I actually found the sleep talking thing really believable (I do it, and I used to walk, too). Talking with her brother was just... sad and hopeful and that was like Kallen too. Now I want to see an AU where Lelouch meets her family. ;-; I might have to write it now, if you have no objections...?

ALSO. YOU ARE CONSUMING MY FAVE STORIES LIST. DD8 ...Not that I'm complaining.

So overall this is cute and adorable and angsty all at the same time, and I have a lump in my throat and. If I could do hearts on here, I could.

;o; ... *Holds out arms for huggie!*

This fic... Oh gosh... *Brushes away tears edging the creases of her eyes adamantly* ...I'm sorry. I don't- ...I didn't expect to get so emotional over this fic. It's! *Sits back and crosses her arms, musing thoughtfully* ...it's the kind of stories I want to write, and love to read... Stories, where... where Kallen is //happy//, not sad. Not discarded. Not used or always raging, raging, endlessly raging against the world and all its oppressions. I love Kallen to the point of dedicating my whole heart and all my talent to her, my time and efforts all revolve around her when I think of Code Geass. And... *Pauses and dips her head downwards in thought* ...thank you... for doing her justice, and making her happy.

I don't know if I have a right to say it, because who am I to do so? But... *Smiles warmly, wistfully* I really, =really= appreciate what you've done for her. Thank you, for making her happy.

that was really sweet awesome job!!

I thought this story was really sweet and kinda nice to read since the anime was somewhat sad ^^

HOMG you're backyay!
It's me. Rosy, but with a dashing new penname. :P
Another wonderful Kalulu, and I'm glad to see it's a happier fic after all the ANGST on your last one.
(as much as I love Kalulu damn I'm suffering from SuzaKallen withdrawalhinthint)
So for now I'll join in the chorus of the rest of your fans:
'WRITE MOAR PLZ'

PS: The Exchange Student to be updated soonyesortamaybe? :3

I just love 'all according to plan'. I read that and laughed so hard just picturing Kallen's face at that moment. Great story though, it really shows what people might be like in their mind.

That is so cute.
I utterly loved it.

Kallen talking so much in her sleep didn't sound so plausible, but since it was all for the sake of sweetness, I don't think it's that much of a big deal. :)

Moonlith

Yay! You're back. We all missed you! :D

Aw... love the whole idea of Kallen dreaming about introducing Lelouch to her brother.

This was so sweet and fluffy. X3 The way you wrote it was very beautiful indeed. The 2nd person narrative put a nice twist to it and I just in awe at the ending.

That was short and sweet! I love how you portrayed Kallen to be fragile and child-like. It's definitely a refreshing change from the angry Kallen.

...Kallen dreaming...DREAMING about introducing Lelouch to her brother...You haven't just lifted the bar for tragic-adorable-Kalulu-beauty; you have scaled Mount Olympus and bludgeoned the gods themselves into submission with it.

Everything about this is incredible. The second person narrative is a unique angle, but you've worked it perfectly, and your writing seems to carry a unique style to it beyond that as well.

Especially powerful was the pointing out of Lelouch's and Kallen's strong sense of pride and sense of inferiority around each other. I could just feel the sense of each *needing* to be better than the other because they feel it's the only way they'll ever deserve a place in the other's life, let alone heart.