HAHAHA! loved the ending.

Well. I'm glad that Frank and Nancy were able to clear things up. O.o

Let's see if you can end the next chapter as well as you did with this one! :)

xoxo
D&S

wow i liked that chap i really want to read more now heh heh ^_^

SWEET!! well worth the wait.

Yipee a new chapter!!
aha. Joe and Vanessa's conversation amused me. Actually, anything involving Joe amuses me.
A rapist randomly goes out on a run? Dedication right there. Ha.

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My jaw dropped with that ending. Wow. Whoa. Wow. Beautiful and ambiguous. Lovely. :)
Keep up the great work!!

+dares to dream+

oh god frank just acted like an idiot lol ^_^

awsome!! just found this and stayed up all night reading it. i am going to be so tired at work. but it is worth it!! up date me baby , up date me!!

Aha. I promise to never leave my pockets unlocked as well.
I.
Love.
Frank.
Can I steal him from you? I feel like, even though he isnt actually your character, you have made him your own. And I love what you have done to him. Can I steal him and keep him as my boyfriend? Hehehe.
ahahaha. On second thought, could I order a mix of Frank AND Joe? I love them both.

o! I cannot wait for the next chapter! :) Your promise of something big is so evil!

Keep up the amazing work! I am really enjoying your story!!

+dares to dream+

Add on soon. the writing has gotten better as you progressed.

hey, not bad! Some parts were awkward, like the conversation transition, but that's about it.

That's about all i could catch while loaded up on cold medicine. I have a cold. So, I'm kinda...on medication. Haha.

Anyways, it's good! Nice chapter. Very antsy. :)

xoxo
D&S

Wow, just stumbled on this story tonight, and I really enjoy it! I feel bad for Amy... Poor girl :( Joe is hilarious, and the bantering between him and Frank always makes me chuckle. This si an amazing fic, and I'm definitely watching out for the next chapter! :D

Again, love Joe! Smart of them to move out of the hotel ;) I think Nancy and Frank should just cuddle up and leave Joe the air mattress! haha. Keep up the good work!

I have to admit - I love Joe. His interactions with Nancy and Frank are really good. I especially loved the whole "The bastard" deadpanned. Perfect Joe. Keep up the good work!

Hey! Sorry I've been remiss in my reviewing- no excuse. I only have time to review this chapter now, but what I have to say is... why did you say you didn't like this chapter?!

I LOVED it! It was touching and HILARIOUS and sad and hopeful at the same time. I loved the portrayal of all of the characters, especially Joe-- and I'm a Frank fan! You can WRITE, girl! This is one of my favorite chapters. Keep up the great work!

Cheryl (who is too lazy to sign in right now!)

omg poor amy can't wait to read more cus i really like this so far ^_^

Whoa, Melissa, I certainly hear you roar. ... Okay that was a very sketchy comment, I apologize. That was just the first thing that popped into my head when i read your comment. That is what little to no sleep + school + running does to a person, I suppose.
Oh dear. You are seriously kicking up the suspense here! IT IS KILLING ME! What will Seth do next? Will he go after Amy? Nancy? Fred? George? Wait...different universe. Frank? Joe? GAH! So many different directions! Please update soon! I dont usually ask that because i feel bad (i have a tendency to procrastinate on my updates...for a very long time) but you are really killing your poor readers! What if we all die because we didnt find out what happens after the 'last chance'! Ultimatum! Ah!
Um... I will stop my ranting now. Oh my... that is it, incomplete homework or not, i am getting to bed. Being tired does strange things to the mind.
Anyway...
LOVED this chapter! Keep up the amazing work!!

+dares to dream+