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Diamond and Stars
2009-11-25 . chapter 12
Oh. The was awkward turtle..pretty much to the extreme. haha.

Good job..though I kinda want tranquility than all this angst. haha. :D :D

xoxo
D&S
Smithy
2009-11-24 . chapter 10
Jealousy is not in Frank Hardy's DNA.
Smithy
2009-11-24 . chapter 12
Some afterglow, huh? I would have thought they would act all lovey-dovey and everything, not have one of them deny it ever happened {a-la Helen Chappel-Hackett when she denied that all that happened between her and her husband before he popped the question was sex}, while the one insisted that something monumental did happen {a-la Joe Hackett the following morning when he was making heart-shaped pancakes. Figure it out. By the way, Joe acting all grossed out was a comedic touch.
inlo
2009-11-23 . chapter 12
awsome!! loved it. worth the wait.

the suspence is very well done in this chapter. string us along.
dares to dream
2009-11-23 . chapter 12
Bigger things? Bigger than that awesome ending between Nan and Frank!? GWAHH!! (Not quite sure what that noise was...but it was joyful, i swear.)
WHOA! WHOA!
Go Frank and Nancy! aha! I love how you insinuate everything while saying nothing, then coming out and shouting it to the heavens practically. Love it.
No! Nancy you silly silly girl!
Gr. Can I take him?
Please?
haha.

HA. Never-mind. I do not want Frank. Joe is all mine. He is so wonderful and innocent. hahaha.
Keep up the great work! I enjoyed this chapter and cant wait for the action to begin to pick up again!

+dares to dream+
animegrlsteph
2009-11-23 . chapter 12
wow that was incredibly awkward but i still cand wait to read more lol ^_^
Hanner Nanner
2009-11-23 . chapter 12
Yes i am a huge Nancy/Frank fan so it was kinda upsetting but i have a strange feeling they will work it out wink wink i still loved it!! i have a feeling something bigger will erupt in the next chapter?? i wonder... i guess for now all i have to do is go back to my girlish Frank/Nancy wonderland!! LA LA LA LA LA...
LUV YA,
Hanner Nanner
Hanner Nanner
2009-11-17 . chapter 11
Oh my gosh that was awesome please continue I love it already!! Its awesome!! Continue!!
LUV YA,
Hanner
Diamond and Stars
2009-10-31 . chapter 11
HAHAHA! loved the ending.

Well. I'm glad that Frank and Nancy were able to clear things up. O.o

Let's see if you can end the next chapter as well as you did with this one! :)

xoxo
D&S
animegrlsteph
2009-10-19 . chapter 11
wow i liked that chap i really want to read more now heh heh ^_^
inlo
2009-10-19 . chapter 11
SWEET!! well worth the wait.
dares to dream
2009-10-18 . chapter 11
Yipee a new chapter!!
aha. Joe and Vanessa's conversation amused me. Actually, anything involving Joe amuses me.
A rapist randomly goes out on a run? Dedication right there. Ha.

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My jaw dropped with that ending. Wow. Whoa. Wow. Beautiful and ambiguous. Lovely. :)
Keep up the great work!!

+dares to dream+
animegrlsteph
2009-10-11 . chapter 10
oh god frank just acted like an idiot lol ^_^
inlo
2009-10-09 . chapter 10
awsome!! just found this and stayed up all night reading it. i am going to be so tired at work. but it is worth it!! up date me baby , up date me!!
dares to dream
2009-10-06 . chapter 10
Aha. I promise to never leave my pockets unlocked as well.
I.
Love.
Frank.
Can I steal him from you? I feel like, even though he isnt actually your character, you have made him your own. And I love what you have done to him. Can I steal him and keep him as my boyfriend? Hehehe.
ahahaha. On second thought, could I order a mix of Frank AND Joe? I love them both.

o! I cannot wait for the next chapter! :) Your promise of something big is so evil!

Keep up the amazing work! I am really enjoying your story!!

+dares to dream+
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