 Silvey M 2009-06-25 . chapter 1Hey there! You write some really great gargoyles fanfiction. I've read everything you have so far, and now I'm on a review crusade!
I really liked this one. I think you captured the team dynamic between everyone really well, especially Dingo. I love that line he says about pretending to be good enough for Robyn--it seems so true to the character that we've seen in cannon so far. And Matrix complimenting Hunter first, and his reasoning behind it? Classic.
I've noticed, though, that there seem to be some spelling errors in a lot of your stories and chapters that, while trivial, can really confuse your intended meaning. For instance, when you referenced the Mona Lisa hanging in the Louvre, Robyn says the Illuminati won't steal it because "they know it's authentic." I think you meant "because it's not authentic" or "because it's fake," otherwise it doesn't really make much sense.
I hope you keep up writing more garg stuff, especially Bad Guys. Also, as a fan you might want to plug the release dates of the upcoming Gargoyles and Bad Guys trade paperbacks. July and August respectively--I'm going to plug it too. Spread the word!
Oh, and awesome story. |