 Kraele and Bremon 2009-04-02 . chapter 1You know, there will be times when I come home, completely tired and wishing I could sleep for fourteen hours straight, and and then I'll see something like this. And suddenly I love the world again. :D Oh, Delius. When will you learn that you just can't escape from Geil? He'd throw himself to Abaddon before he gave up on you. ;D
A couple more suggestions. In the beginning, you spelled Dwayna "Dwanya" and you spelled ecstasy (;DD) "ecstacay". The long dialogues were very amusing, though.
So, so. Do we get to see more of the long trip to Kaineng? Perhaps Geil has to take care of a sea sick Delius? Or more running around and professing love? |