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ninjapoke 8/21/11 . chapter 1Ok, there is a lot of potential for this story. Sure there are a lot of holes like how they all survived, but it's easily overlooked if you just use your imagination. Are you planning on continuing this? |
Bayliss 8/20/09 . chapter 1I don't understand the timeline, to be honest. Capa detached the payload from the ship so I really don’t see how he and Cassie survived. They died when the bomb was detonated. And why weren’t they informed that there was a second ship? Is it like Icarus? |