well done. this was great - despite its short length, it was really emotive and detailed.

Great work,

Love Bundi

wow.. thise is good. i don't agree with how zuko feels but only a litteal.

I could feel the emotion there for Zuko, but it was rather short. Mostly I liked the ending lines, "There’s nothing left there. Briefly, Zuko wonders if there ever was." Nice little piece.

That was a good read. :) Keep up the great work! :)