This is really well written! It's nice to see a story told from little Ben's point of view for a change.
And that last line is so eerie and creepy.

Very sweet!

this is sweet, I love how you made them interact. But it is kind of sad that Juliet is the only adult who cares about him. Anyway, awesome fic:)

oh, oh so sad...poor childhood Ben. I bet he does become infatuated with Juliet so that he seeks her out as an adult...

i have to admit, this is kind of creepy, but it's also kinda cute! i really like Ben as a kid!

Although Ben doesn't know what would happen in the future, and Juliet does, I can see the seeds of Not in Portland in this story. Isn't time traveling fun? Poor Ben.

I love how you portray little Ben here, and how Juliet tries to be friendly to him, even though she knows how he turns out. I wish we could see more of that on the show, but you bring it to light here in such a powerful way. Lovely.
-Nyx