 InfinityOnTheRun 2009-11-17 . chapter 1Depressing.. but still undeniable hot. What a combination xD |
 RemindsmeofaWestSideStory 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I teared up at the end.
Amazing ♥ |
 Anime18Emo 2009-10-16 . chapter 1im reviewing like you asked ^^;
anyways, this story was amazing! xD really, i liked the way you wrote it! so awesome lol you should keep writing SuzaLulu cuz youre beyond amazing! ;D |
 Cecilia Waters 2009-09-17 . chapter 1wah you made me cry. Really. I'm tearing up, a little. So stop it! Nonononoono no don't stop but...anyways. This was really sad and well written. This is not a new concept but you've written it amazingly it's very touching. very good 'smut' if that's what you want to call it. To me it just adds to the sadness of their relationship. |
 SuMMerStarZ 2009-07-26 . chapter 1This story was SOO good! I love how hott and smutty it was, LOVED it! |
 DarkMetalAngel of Destruction 2009-06-23 . chapter 1great story. hope to read more stories from you soon. |
 Shadowking160 2009-06-08 . chapter 1Wow, lovely story! Well written and it really captured their friendship and feelings for each other! T_T I've seen the ending several times and I've cried each time Suzaku plunged that sword into Lelouch!
Bravo and thank you for the wonderful story.
All hail Lelouch! |
 MP3228 2009-05-25 . chapter 1oh yeah that last comment was by me btw. |
 maybe he kept the contrac 2009-05-25 . chapter 1 omgah your story was so awesome
please dont cry...its making me cry. theres controversy over weather lulu died or not. and i think he didnt. b/c at the end cc was in the hay stack on a HOT summer day and the driver was in some heavy clothing...c'mon man does that make sense to you? obviously the driver was prolly lelouch. he obtained two geass's like his father, his father was immortal and cc said that after a while of using your geass too much you would reach a point of immortality. like he kept his true intentions secret maybe he was keeping the fact that he WOULDNT die a secret. the contract! maybe he kept the contract alive with cc i dunno
your story was good
it made me cry on the insides <3 |
 Sakura23011 2009-05-24 . chapter 1 Nahahaha I liked that:D |
 Dust to Dusk 2009-05-17 . chapter 1I love the beginning where Lelouch is acting so light-hearted. It contrasts so sharply with Suzaku's feelings and what the reader knows is coming tomorrow. It creates good tension leading up to the love scene, and makes Suzaku's request feel all the more appropriate to the circumstances. I thought you did the sex scene well. The parts I liked the best were actually little things that showed the characters' vulnerabilities. Sex is a very vulnerable act, and I've noticed that a lot of fanfic writers tend to forget that. But you didn't. Good on you! |
 TheYaoiQueen 2009-05-17 . chapter 1I love this story. I love lelouch and suzaku because there is no way that they don't have feeling for each otherXD.You have very good writing. It has alot of potential. Your writing is refreshing compared to some of the mediocre writing that is very common in anime fanfics. I realloy hope you continue writingXD |
 Nini. 2009-05-11 . chapter 1 KDAOASDIO!
I love you.
I love you so much <3
<3 <3 <3 .>
And stalk you.
And raep you.
Naw.
I kid.
Anywho.
My livejournal is Sm3rWonderland 8D
Toodles? |
 Val-Creative 2009-04-26 . chapter 1A very nice mixture of yummy boy-on-boy and some insight of Lelouch and Suzaku's character. I'd like to think that they had spent Lelouch's final night together...in that way. ^/^
~ Val |
 blueravenchick 2009-04-06 . chapter 1Lelouch dying at the end is sad! What a fucked up ending, huh!?! Anyway, I loved you smutty story! It was hot and sweet at the same time. :) |