Another wicked chapter, and pity the Autobots were so close too! Ah heck, there's always a next time! I loved the dialogue between Scourge and Mega-Octane too! :D

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No complaints at all with how this has turned out. I've enjoyed every chapter equally; it's like watching an episode in my mind (I may have already mentioned this in a previous review, but it merits being repeated!) You nailed down so many of the "little" things that make stories fun to read, not the least of which is holding the characters in high enough regard to keep them true to form.

Well done! (I look forward to the epi.)

Love the Scourge/Mega-Octane stuff; just wanted to let you know I'm still following this and still enjoying it!

This seems like a really good RiD fic. You nail Scourge's character perfectly, which i appreciate since he's one of my fave TF characters of all!

Hm, guess the Decepticons didn't realise that the Preds are somewhat smarter than they thought! And more interesting turn of events too, and with Scourge's lines!

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Great job writing the Decepticons and Sky-Byte; you can really get a feel for who these characters are. Good stuff!

It's a wonder how things go at enemy HQ... and in addition - when do the 'cons find out about the human escapee? :D

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Liked the bit with Movor - and note to self, never ** off Meggie! Gotta feel sorry for the 'cons at times!

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Interesting on what a couple of drones could do - and if being kidnapped, how the heck is one meant to go to the toilet? ^^; Poor Mega-Octane, gotta feel sorry for him at times! Another great chapter!

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This story is well worth reviewing! I think you nailed the essence of the RiD series perfectly with how you're handling the characters and their personalities. You have an easy-to-enjoy writing style and it has a great flow to it. I also thought you did a tremendous job in letting the reader inside Onishi's head at the end of chapter 2. Good stuff!

Good to hear from you again, and not only that interesting points of view on the character roster too!

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