That was great. So good and sad at the same time...

sad ): but it's an awesome oneshot!

This made me tear up and smile at the same time- good job!

yeah he does doesnt he?

Wow... You captured the true irony of the world. This fic was utter perfection.

Wow. This is great! Despite its size, it had such great depth and insight into those who are cursed. Allen with his eye. Kanda with his longevity. Lavi with his memory. And Lenalee who couldn't do a thing to help them. It's true that the Order forgets that they are, in fact, children. This piece tugged at my heart and how unfortunate Exorcists truly are, being dragged into this war.

Wow, this was really good. It was definatelt something a bit different than what I usually read.

Love it. It was really cute and angsty kind of.

:)

Oh... oh, wow.

The poignant hues of this story made me ill. Despite its small size, it had so much inner meaning. I loved it. Your usage of extensive vocabulary was a nice touch, and your descriptions were beautiful--almost to the point of haunting.

Komui's line of: "God has a terrible sense of humor," killed me, it truly did. Beautiful, articulate, and perfect--I loved it.

It is so rare that one finds a DGM story (especially one as short as yours) that delves into the inner recesses of the character's minds and woes, and makes the reader feel for them at the same time. I believe that we all do forget just how young they all are, at times.

This story is just... for lack of a better term: outstanding. It blew my mind away to the point where the wall behind me is covered with my gray matter. Beautiful job.

You're right, that is angsty. True, though...but still angsty. Glad to see you aren't dead.

-PurificationArrow