How about much later when Schingi marries Miotismon, he changes her and they live together. The other kids could get married too and start families of their own. I think Angemon and Angewomon would make nice parents, their kids would be raised right - with the Bible and all so that's not half bad. That is all I can give you, hope you can use it somewhere.

Miotismon could've changed the girl into a vampire then as well, why isn't he? I want him to!

Why couldn't Miotismon come to the girl's aid when she was bleeding in Peidmon's house, turn her, and be done with it?

This is kind of like Twilight, but the girl is playing Bella's role. Why doesn't Miotismon chanbge her into a vampire and they get married? I hope he does, please put that in somewhere

I just wonder if this 9th Digidestined is part monkey, ha! Well, keep updating and I'll know more

Well I hate to say it, but I hope things go well for Miotismon and the rest. I hate writing, speaking, or reading that name but I'll have to won't I? Keep updatin

What an ideot! Why would Miotismon be a good Digimon now, the good guys need to get rid of him and fast.

I liked this chapter, but wonder what happens next. Was that girl Wizardmon's daughter?

Good story Shinji. Good idea to base this series around the original plot. I also think this was more of a TK kind of fic (and that always makes them better).

Good story. I think you should write more. Good choice using Myotismon as your Digimon._

COOL!

::Reads 'Spirit Warrior, Shin-san's' review:: ...When the hell did I give her permission to review in my word? Freaking idiot.

::Looks at Sidra Astro's review:: Er... This is on behalf of Shinji Shazaki, the writer. Eva is the abreviated term for Neon Genesis: Evangelion, or NGE, or Eva. Hope that cleared it up for ya!

waching to much DBZ inposibal kamahamah kaoken distrotodisk

::Reads 'Trash's' review:: Oooooooooooooooook... What the hell was the problem with that guy? Well, anyway... Good story! Too bad the next part IS slightly PWP. Argh...