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| Fire Dolphin 2007-02-11 ch 4,  | abusei hope that u update soon. and that usa stays with Duo! update |
| Raine of The Darkness Clan 2005-05-16 ch 4, | abuseShare SHARE why won't you share with me PLEASE update Raine |
| starrlightlin7 2005-04-16 ch 4, | abusethis is geat are you going to post apoll for couples |
| SailorStar9 2005-01-11 ch 4, | abuseOne sentence: Relena must die! |
| DeLa Lune 2005-01-02 ch 4, | abuseThis is so good, please update soon. ^-^ |
| Huu 2004-12-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseThe story is too good to let be hanging for two year.. please finish it up.. thanks.. |
| Lurker 2004-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are a terrible writer. Actually, beyond terrible. You have absolutely no skill whatsoever, nor any real grasp of how the English language is structured, to say nothing of how a proper narrative is constructed. Your prose is stilted and uninspired, your characterisation is questionable, your habit of dropping asides in the middle of narrative is odious, and your plot is incoherent, inconsistent, and inexcusably sloppy. You should not attempt to write, because you are very, very bad at it. |
| Sweet Sugar 2004-07-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat story I hope you're going to update soon ! |
| Sweet Sugar 2004-07-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat story I hope you're going to update soon ! |
| Silver Fox28 2004-03-27 ch 4, | abusestupid relena needs to die! evil richard is such a meany. |
| anonymous 2004-03-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseno! please write more |
| Raiha 2004-01-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseplease finish this |
| bRok3nw1nGz 2004-01-16 ch 1, | abusePlease update soon! I've just noticed thta you haven't for a long time now. :O) |
| Rose 2003-07-29 ch 4, anon. | abusePlease update this story soon |
| Lea Tiger 2003-07-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseUPDATE SOON PLEASE! |