ICK! EW...! EW...! EW...! SO...Wrongsick!
Love it though. (God, I am sick.) I never in a million years thought I would ever read a KP Vore fanfic. But i am blown away by the intense storytelling fervor of the author. Wow! Good Job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Love it! Keep it up!

sick! i hope i can continue reading coz its good... not makin any promises though, good thing i haven't eaten yet... dude, you have a brilliant twisted mind...!

holy mother of creepiness! this is ... different & pretty good..

This fic is so awesome. I love how you write Wendigo!Kim. I really wanted someone to answer this challenge and you did it wonderfully.

Dark and twisted, but written in such a way that it doesn't seem to come across as "for the sake of being gross". Definitely worth a read for fans of M-rated fics, and tales that are a bit disturbing, yet evocative.

A change of pace, more dialog this time around, and delving deeper into Kim's "ish". The ending to this part was very good; a nice cliff hanger that was all it needed to be and nothing less or more.

I found myself getting frustrated at Kim for dragging it out, what she had to say. NOT at the author, but at the character! lol, speaks well of the author's ability to draw you into the story. Well done.

Yet another great chapter in this story. The slow build up is almost painful, but in a good way. It leaves a lot of anticipation towards the final result.

I'm beginning to see where this came from, but this is good story-telling none-the-less. It doesn't feel rushed, and it has a lot of good descriptives.

The writing itself is very good; it's always a pleasure to read something written this well. No glaring grammar or spelling errors.

This was a very good introduction and build up, the descriptive story telling worked very well, and kept me interested in seeing what was going to happen. I'l definitely keep reading.

Da da dum!
I must say that somethimes i must reread the chapter cause both the character are so vague...or its just cause im a silly swede that doesnt understand english that well;P
But then again the vagueness gives the story some charm and mystery.
I usually can guess the motive of some characters but yours arent that easy.
Thx for the chapter and fast update!
=]

oh this is getting even better although it would ahve been funny to have shego get a nightmare of being tressed up like a turkey in front of a sharp tooth kim holding a fork and knife, preparing to carve up her meal. :)

hope shego never uses the term bite me.

i'm surprised that kim wasn't trying to bite shego.

I tend to forget to review, having had peeks over on the Haven, sorry!

Doing an excellent job of maintaining the outre bizarreness. I'm glad you went with my suggestion of Shego *forcing* Kim to eat as opposed to the original of Shego simply *offering*. Offering Kim would have flatly refused, no matter her frame of mind. Being force fed, even if not knowing exactly what, plays into Kim's core identity better.

It also underlines exactly how deeply Shego cares for Kim and how far she'll go for her...

You have to use the line somewhere that "Now we're truly 'one flesh'..."

Looking for more!

How you can keep such a steady level of creepiness in your story without it becoming either stale or overdone is truly outstanding. Very interested in what is up with Shego's wound, I got an idea but wont say in the review...

Can't wait for more!

Wispr