Hm...I liked this!:D

This chapter was good!

hey, ok so i read up to about halfway down when i sorta got the gist she was leaving him... wtf why? i totally respect your authours perogative (did that make any sense lol!) but yea so can you tell me if they get backk together cos i dont wanna read anymore untill yepp.. infact im going to go as far as saying i wont read anymore anyway. It was beautiful.. it is beautiful and i think the end spoils it a bit. Thats just my opinion... I also wanted to say i think your an amazing authour and writer and even though i dislike the end your really talented so um... dont get offended yea?

That was great! But you're evil! That was the biggest cliffie I've read yet!

Awesome story you did great

that was really sad! but i loved it! i will def read the sequel!

its a really good story so far but techniclly he wouldnt have a shot gun shell in his head the shell is the part the falls to the ground after the gun is fired

ohohoho

teacher and student in love? is that right?

lol

nice chapter

Absolutely tragic

the carlisle lost absolutely everything ... women, children ... tragedy

so he returns to Forks ...

nice chapter

hi

a teacher ... and returning to live in Forks ... it promises a lot of confusã

And yes ... Bella is also living in Forks with Charlie ... you really will insist on the teacher and student ... our same courage you have ... it always goes bad ...

nice chapter

OMG! I just read Trip Around The Sun and Starlight... I absolutely think you are a fantabulus author! EP! BTW, this is my second time reading this... I've already read Inside Out! EP!1

What the Hale ?

that is like soo sad :(

SARAPOO! vuury good child, i still remember the ones you wrote in class. youre going to become a writer i cant wait to read the nxt chapter ]

HELL YES! THE BABY LIVES!

Rosalie is being a total brat...and she's going to ruin her hearing...I like it!