thiss...this just. *shudders*

i luv ya one shot XD

that was allsome:)

-the power of darkness

As if the subject matter was not disturbing enough, your complete and serious lack of grammatical skills are that much worse. Have you read the book at all? Have you taken an English class at any point in your life? Most importantly, are you currently seeing a therapist?

If not, all of the above should be added to your "To do" list. Until then, please spare us. No one wants to read this garbage.

A little odd, but it's hard when the brother has to become the parent. Liked Pony's line though.

i like all of your stories please up date all that is not finch please and thank you

that was a good story... made me laugh my ass off!... it was a good funny story especially the ending

this is the bomb man! Hell yeah!

Actually the story sucks as much as the summary, if not more. What the fuck is the appeal of spanking in a story anyway?

Awesomness! Even though you might wanna have a beta take a look at your grammar but the story is all right :D

-You need to bump the rating up. Spanking fetish and the language you are using get a M rating. Actually spanking fetishes belong on adultfanfiction dot com.

-Your grammar is horrendous. You desperately need to get a beta and refresh yourself on grammar rules.

-Soda is nearly 17! Why the hell do you think he would get spanked? What teenager you know gets spanked?

Mo