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RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-28 . chapter 5
Gyah more please! T_T

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-28 . chapter 4
T∆T Keep going Yumemi!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-28 . chapter 3
Slightly confused again. XD I like it though. =)

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-28 . chapter 2
Wonderful job! =)

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Wait what? I love the writing but am confused how it relates to Munto. =O

Ari chan
nightshade
2009-09-02 . chapter 5
i like this story and the memory loss was a good idea.
please continiue this story!
Ruize
2009-04-19 . chapter 5
You should DEFENITELY continue on this story!
Mixed-Colors
2009-04-05 . chapter 5
Lovely story. I can't wait to see more from you.

On another note: Curse you, Gntarl! xD

Still, I'm glad Yumemi remembered. I was never one for sad endings.
ONIX-21
2009-04-04 . chapter 5
Aw that was so sweet :D
and such a great ending
im glad she remembered everything!!
i'll definitely read ur sequel if u decide to write one hehe
lookin forward to reading more!! XD
ElfMaidenOfLight
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
awesome! i can't wait for the next part!
ONIX-21
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
Another awesome 2 chapters :D
Lots of things being revealed!!
and did they really just meet again? yay!!
cant wait to see wats gona appen next
hope u update soon!! XD
ElfMaidenOfLight
2009-03-30 . chapter 3
HMM, I wonder when Munto is going to come and start telling her off for forgetting about him.

But I can't believe she would! I mean, he was so important to her... unless... hmm. I have an idea. You may already be thinking this, but I'll say it anyway.

I think readers would have a hard time believing that Yumemi would just forget everything that's happened, however, if you're saying that at the end of the anime (disreguarding the end credits) that once the worlds joined she went back to Earth, woke up, and her memory was locked away, then it would work. Explain more and it would make sense.

Write more!! lol
ElfMaidenOfLight
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
eep! chapter 2! exciting!
Mixed-Colors
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
Tell me, tell me, tell me this isn't the end. I want to know why Yumemi would forget something as influential on her life as the events that occurred throughout the series.

Oh, please continue! This was excellent, and you've left me wanting more.

Short, but nice. ;)
ElfMaidenOfLight
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
WHAT?! How can that be complete!? Did Yumemi have amnesia? ohmygosh what happened? This is complete torture!

I love the way you can play and tug at emotions. I could actually feel Yumemi breaking down. Such talent! Write more!
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