Great, especially for your first time!

Sooooo cute! It waswonderful!

Eeeeeeeeee! Fabulous as always!

Emma:All of your stories make us squeel! It's so funny!

you got me crying. that was perfect.

Kawaii Nyan!

Loved it !

Seriously consider more !

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'Floating in thin air, and wearing his signature cocky grin, was the bane of her existence, Kish.'

That was a very well-phrased line.

A few pointers: watch out for the your/you're thing, and make sure you use an apostrophe to indicate that somethign belongs to someone (eg. Kish's Koneko-chan) She seemed to go a little abruptly from hating him to loving him, and if a boy used such flowery language on me (unless it was Pai) I'd think he was taking the piss, but some good stuff here :)

True

They were a little out of character, but oh, it doesn't matter. :D I think it's understandable considering the depth of emotion involved. That was lovely, thank you for writing it.

I loved the story!

It was sweet and romantic,

I think it was perfect.

i thought it was good but i didnt think ichigo would give in that quickly like that but i do still wanna see it progess.

This was such a cute story!

But, be careful, you tried to rush things a bit. Next time, make it so that she eases into loving him. If you go and rush, the story loses all its meaning and cuteness.

Well, I hope to see more from you. Good luck!

nahh I think you did a great definitly caught Ichigo and kish's emotions.