|Reviews for To Be With You|
| Kitty 3/12/11 . chapter 1
Great, especially for your first time!
| Mew Kisu 1/26/11 . chapter 1
Sooooo cute! It waswonderful!
| DarkAngel21 8/29/10 . chapter 1
Eeeeeeeeee! Fabulous as always!
Emma:All of your stories make us squeel! It's so funny!
| KishxIchigo4eva 4/26/10 . chapter 1
you got me crying. that was perfect.
| Rurupu-kun 1/24/10 . chapter 1
| Thehugestkisshufaninthegalaxy 8/14/09 . chapter 1
Loved it !
Seriously consider more !
Prez of I love kisshu-kun fan club
| True Colours 8/5/09 . chapter 1
'Floating in thin air, and wearing his signature cocky grin, was the bane of her existence, Kish.'
That was a very well-phrased line.
A few pointers: watch out for the your/you're thing, and make sure you use an apostrophe to indicate that somethign belongs to someone (eg. Kish's Koneko-chan) She seemed to go a little abruptly from hating him to loving him, and if a boy used such flowery language on me (unless it was Pai) I'd think he was taking the piss, but some good stuff here :)
| GypsyxBells 7/3/09 . chapter 1
They were a little out of character, but oh, it doesn't matter. :D I think it's understandable considering the depth of emotion involved. That was lovely, thank you for writing it.
| AnnieAngel93 4/7/09 . chapter 1
I loved the story!
It was sweet and romantic,
I think it was perfect.
| Mrs.Cullen26 4/7/09 . chapter 1
i thought it was good but i didnt think ichigo would give in that quickly like that but i do still wanna see it progess.
| rico late mew 3/30/09 . chapter 1
This was such a cute story!
But, be careful, you tried to rush things a bit. Next time, make it so that she eases into loving him. If you go and rush, the story loses all its meaning and cuteness.
Well, I hope to see more from you. Good luck!
| mewmewfan1 3/30/09 . chapter 1
nahh I think you did a great definitly caught Ichigo and kish's emotions.