Continue this! its getting good!

Schweet!

First off: Normal people wouldn't be so calm when they realize that they're in a book, Carlisle wouldn't offer something like that, and your character is quite obviously a self-insert.

This story is really good! ur an amazing writer! write more soon please! (oh and please check out my stories too))

update update this is awesome

Love this story please update soon. )

i wonder which book this is in.

why did she just scream and stay in the street?

That was really good. I hope you continue with this story, it has really good potential. I love these kinda stories.