Very poetic indeed. :)

This was really nice. We don't get many Lugia and Ash stories out here and you did it amazingly well. Lugia's last line definitely was what caught my attention. Because Ash's name is quite poetic and important to both his mother and to the world.

I really like this interaction between Red and Mewtwo, between a human and a Pokemon. Mewtwo's last lines did twinge my heart a little, how he mentioned how he couldn't speak to the rocks and he was afraid that he would perish without talking to anyone else. It was just so human of him to feel that kind of emotion, the feeling of loneliness and despair.

I can't believe I've never gotten to these before now--powerful bunch of storytelling that I'm sorely sad I overlooked. Your prose is all too telling; the characters are human and yet not, wanting love and life and whatever else they can bring. Truly, truly remarkable.

I eagerly await the next chapter.

~B.

*bittersweet smile* Simple, but I love the idea. Plus you always make the concept of wanderlust and a life of journeying so poetic.

I particularly liked the conversation between Red and Mewtwo. As you mentioned before, curiosity kills the cat, but satisfaction brought it back.

You really brought that part of the game to life. You are such a talented writer and I can't wait for more. :)

Hee. These latest three chapters make me want to wade through my old game to find and pick up Pokémon Yellow again. You make Mewtwo oddly... sweet, even though still violent and all. ♥

I can't believe you're not getting more reviews for this. All these drabbles are simply amazing and jaw-droppingly wonderful. A very interesting moment with Red and Mewtwo, how Mewtwo called out to Red, beckoning him to come.

Mewtwo's tale is a tragic one, and you brought to life that harsh reality with this piece. :)

*teary eyed*

Wow, that was incredible. Extremely perceptive and very well written. Keep up the amazing work. :)

I love every single one of these. I can't really be more constructive because I'm just touched, really touched - this is just lovely. :'D

Whoa. No way! Giovanni is Ash's dad?!?! Very interesting that Deliah named Ash because of the ashes of her previous life and how she encourages to do what she couldn't. I liked the idea that Giovanni wants Pikachu not because it is a Pikachu but because it belongs to Ash and it would break him if he got it.

Aw... that was a sad drabble.. =( But beautiful.