I like it so far. It sounds interesting.

Really good! i like the story. Update soon

I like this story a lot and can't wait til the next chapter!

i loved this!

i really like it !

por edward

hope you get more ideas soon

xx

omg you can't leave it like that

that is evil

i am loving this

OMG, OMG! Please write more!

I still like the premise of the story. My only real complaint is that it is just moving along slowly. I realize that is sometimes necessary, just wish there was more to read.

hey i loved it ]

i truly did, its vair awsome

woo

write more

iif you do

Emmett will give you a piggy back, Alice and Rosalie will take you shoppin and bella will try not be clumsy

3 Alice x

O. I realy do love your story. I Also like the conflict.

omfg, well good, seriously it is xx

I like this story idea. Keep on writing. Loved it!

I hate not knowing, left to ponder while you wait to put up another chapter. It is actually interesting, and I would like to keep going. I started my own story but never kept going because not ONE PERSON reviewed, so I thought that I should just quit writing. :(

Who would not want to read a twilight fanfiction anyway? UGH.

Like it, please continue writing!

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