Great story. That's something that's always bugged me about KH fanfiction--what about the parents??

Awe this was so cute!=D i loved it!

Aw, that was so cute!

I love wedding stories. There should be more. This was great to read and it was paced perfect!

You know, to put it simply. That was a very enjoyable read. Seriously, thank you so much for writing that. I've been feeling deprived lately of good fics. Not that there aren't any out there, just that there aren't enough. So once again, thank you very much!

Perhaps you might want to replace "hansom" with "handsome"? Sorry, that's the only thing that bothered me in this whole thing. But that was the ONLY thing! So good job.

...you are such a sap.
honest to god, kaykay.
at least mine was angsty.
seriously, seriously angsty.
...kidding, kidding, it was good.
...couple of spelling mistakes though, methinks.
i be watching the terminator.
the first one.
it's so old it's actually kinda funny.
...i think i might write a star wars fiction.
you're a sap, and i'm a nerd.
lol.

Aw...
Just perfect. Incredible job on this one!

-Safety and Peace-

so cute and romantic. keep up the good work and hope you update soon.

Good story. Do you plan to expand the story at all? I'd love to see more in this story.

Your Fellow Fan Fiction Member,
Vergil Theart

Despite there being numerous grammatical errors, mostly with incorrectly placed words, I enjoyed reading this. You brought many factors that were not originally introduced, and molded them in your favor. Not only that but you managed to make laugh outloud when proposed the faux marriage at age six; 'fruit by the foot'...

Excellent story

~Ebo

Right, your one of the losers in Ontario who's getting all the heat while it's still staying around zero over here in central Alberta!

Besides that, I loved this. It was great. Sora just saying the words 'Marry me.' Was great, and how they got Riku's dad to marry them since he is a judge.

Actually, Sora's proposal reminded me a little of Rab's proposal to Mac on the final episode of JAG. But only just a little.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk