it wasn't too OOC. I think they actually may be the only personn who can really understand each other...

Great job ^^ There are a lot of stories and drabbles and whatnots that use Allen's smiles as an idea but I think this one is one of my top favorites ^^
Great job. Keep it up ^^

; _; I loved it... <3

Not OOC. I can tell you that.

yay, angst?
Coz you know that Kanda would totally have some twisted logic that allowed him to punch Allen to make him feel better. xD
It's not TOO OOC, which is good. And very, very good for a first-timer. Aha, you're a Kanda/Allen virgin! :D
Much love for you and hopes that you continue to write stuff like this!

Woah..this is beautiful ;_; I love your writing very much and the characterization of Allen and Kanda is priceless.

Instant fave. GREAT JOB.

(Just one thing: the word 'i' keeps appearing in front and after each italic word so it was kinda hard to read those words. Maybe it could be fixed...? Agh, I'm so picky)

Ahaha ^^

Met you again in here ^^

Your fic is so cute XD

weird? what do yu mean i fucking loved it! :D lol i wish there was more :(

ZOMG!! YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS FANFIC!! lol, sorry for being harsh there. I hardly review people's fic unless their fanfic is awesome and cool like yours. XD and nope, i don't think your way of writing both Kanda/Allen here is OOC. Good work!