nice ending :) i thought that was a future scene or something..phew, luckily it was just a dream

phew...for a moment there...let not think that shall we..? >_<

anyway, ha, well he's still nameless soldier A in my book :P died woohoo^^

and some tender moment there with Cameron and Sarah :)

ha, nice meeting you, nameless soldier A, and good bye :P

oh? she's showing more emotion than i thought :)

those guys are so going to regret this :P

That dream had be thinking you'd moved it into the future. The fact that even in Sarah's dream Cameron claims her, as her own is great. I hoped that Sarah would have lashed out at Derek for killing her, and was surprised to see she didn't instead she just let out her frustration and hurt through calling out Cameron's name.

I look forward to reading the sequel and hope that the relationship between the two will continue to grow.

They got the spider out and they're both unharmed. (smile) That's awesome!

Their conversations were deep. I'm glad that Sarah agreed to help Cameron and they have everything out in the open so to speak. Its sad that Cameron can't remeber futur John anymore, but she's alive and is in control of herself, so it's all okay.

I hope that they get Sam.

Well, the minute they had Sarah on the bed I figured one of those men was goin got come up with the bright idea to do SOMETHING. (sigh) I just hadn't expected it to actually be them forcing Cameron to kiss Sarah. I mean, not that it seemed like they both didn't enjoy the kiss, but that whole scene had me holding my breath waiting to see how it'd all plan out. I'm happy that they escaped those men and they no longer have to worry about the collar. Now they just need to defeat this spider thing, and kill Sam. Maybe he has a way to make the spider stop, otherwise I hope she realizes that she didn't even have to fight the reprogramming when she kissed Sarah, there was no strain. I'm thinking that'll play into something, but I'll just have to wait and see.

Great chapter. Wonderful story. Off to see what happens to our two favorite heroines.

The fact that they know her programming is being reversed, yet they think that's a good thing, shocks me. I mean, they don't know how long it'll take for her to revert and once she does they're all dead because if she's willing to kill Sarah then they're all ants compared to her and John. I don't know it surprises me that they're not scared that she'll just turn on all of them and kill them. (shrug) Its their own mistake to under estimate her.

Sarah being Cameron's human is interesting. The scene of her holding her is both sad and touching. The plane scene, with Carmeron bascially being Sarah's chair was sweet. I'm glad at least they stopped fighting and will hold off until their safe. (smile)

Well...that went from bad to worse rather quickly. Which usually happens, but that's alright. What killed in this chapter was the last two paragraphs. Sarah's prone position and Cameron's need to pound the ** out of Matt for hurting Sarah, but being unable to because of that collar. (sigh) I hope they can figure out how to get out of this before its too late.

Well the first scene is wonderfuly domestic. I had mornings just like that, except my mother didn't expect 100 on a Calculus test from me. lol. Good start. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story continues. That phone call is just the beginning of a wonderful new adventure I'm sure.

Interesting and good. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

aw, this was really great, a good mix of action and romance! i can't wait to read your sequel!

Your depiction of Sarah encouraging and supporting Cameron's mental fight was wonderful!

aw! *hugs them both and gives you a cookie*

aw! *is so touched by Sarah's determination despite actually coming REALLY FREAKING close to death this time*

oh **... poor Cam, fighting anything in your head is never a good thing... and poor Sarah for suffering a collar! that ALWAYS sucks.

this is a pretty damn exciting!