i reaally loved the story. great job!

i am hungry

Heh i did love it, those who hate it Sword shut just cut them up xD

Review eh? Whelp, I liked it! Though it got a biit suggestive about 3/4 of the way through...but other than that, I really did like it Pen!

Pen, Sword, quit yer fightin' I already had to deal with you, Pen, last night!

Andi

Kelly: Great! AWESOME! CUTE!

Cooky: I can't believe I'm about to say this but i WAS AWESOME! CUTE!

You should put the name of the song and a disclaimer,or this story could get deleted.

They are really out of character,but it wouldnt happen without it!XD

Good story,hope to see more of you.

AW!

that was ...i mean it was... OH ITWAS THE BEST THING I EVER READ!

i like your stories especially when come in songs, nice. I LOVE THE SONAMY ONES, they're cute!_ *squeal*

First, I love this song. It can be creepy, but this tends to be one of my favs. Second, nice job perfectly synching it to your story. And third, I enjoyed how we know exactly what is going on, but from Amy's POV it's just like one of her daydreams: He pops in out of nowhere and romantically says, "I love you." It's corny, but understandably so. And fun when she's got him backed against the wall. So, yes, good job, not particularly OOC.

Aww this is so cute.

I love it!

Wow. Incredible . . .

Feels like ur writing has improved a lot, this story is much better than the old one.

Really

i actually liked it a lot, it was very cute

Very different

I have never read a SonAmy like this

and when i mean by very different It doesn't mean I hate it I loved it please add more stories soon

Timeless Eclipse

Loved it