this is so good! well written and the tone is spot on. i hope you write more!

Not a fan of Flavian, rather dislike him really, Enjoying the other characters a lot. I like how you are weaving in the era in which the story is set instead of overlooking it.

Oh, that's sad. I feel sorry for Anouk, but something better is out there for her, no?

"He is good, eh?" I sense some intrigue heading my way and I love it!

Lovely!

Am enjoying it a lot so far! Good job. Happily there is more to read.

Cheers, Free

A wonderful chapter again!Very well written!Well done!
Update soon please!:)

I LOVE it !
I loved the movie and I love this !
You must continue, please
The words are so colorful
They paint a beautiful picture in my mind
Thank you for writing this.

Wonderful!I loved it!Can't wait for the next part!XD

Great chapter once again!Well done!
Update soon!XD

Oh!She left?
Wonderful chapter!Please write more soon?XD

Very nice start.Please continue!I love this film so much!:)