so good. please keep writing

Loved this! great story! cant wait for more!

great!

YEY! I love it! I wonder when Edward will come into the picture?

-ILoveReadingAndWriting

I like how you have taken the story of Sabrina and adapted it to Twilight. My one complaint is that there are spelling and grammar errors. It makes it hard to enjoy the story.

i liked it..

i cant wait until some more chapters are up..

i like the way u put mike in it..

please update soon!

great sis

This is a good chapter but I can't wait for her to fall in love with Edward. Hope you update as soon as you can.

-ILoveReadingAndWriting

its good! promise!

cool sis!

Hmm...I think that this is the start of a good story. Keepp it up. :-)

-ILoveReadingAndWriting

i think this is a REALLY good start!

its the perfect introductoin to the story!

well i cant wait until the next chapter!

i hope you update soon!