 amyblair 2009-09-25 . chapter 1Hey! I've used that quote before!
I like how 'the security guards blood still warm on his face'. This so brings us to how important the event was to Mr. Wesson.
I like the rush of remembrance of everyone and how it made him feel dizzy.
Oh, and I agree with you. Yellow? Totally not Sam's color.
We never did see what kind of car Sam drove. Huh. Maybe he took the bus.
I love that Dean decided to sell the Prius. HA.
First one, huh? Pretty damn good. |
 Sarah 2009-04-24 . chapter 1 Dude, Bobby finding the Impala outside in his yard with all of the boy's stuff inside and no explaination? That is begging to be written. Please write that or I will. Just reading that line gave me half a dozen ideas for a story. Mind if I steal it?
I really can't picture Dean living on rabbit food for three weeks. Boy must starving in the true sense of the word. And I agree with you about Sam needing a slap over the head as well. Being a hunter is his choice too.
The boys need to get their heads outta their asses and make up once and for all, kick Ruby to the curb and start playing by their own rules. Listening to heaven and hell hasn't excactly worked out for them, has it? |
 Nilah 2009-04-05 . chapter 1Loved it.
He's really intense about his food, isn't he? If only things would be settled that easily on the show. I have a feeling that we're in for a little rougher ride. |
 cursedgirl 2009-04-01 . chapter 1AH! More..more..please hurry up! |
 K Hanna Korossy 2009-04-01 . chapter 1That was very satisfying. I'm glad you accounted for Sam's return of memories and what Bobby thought when they went missing for three weeks. Great characterizations, and I could totally visualize Dean's love affair with the burger! Also, small point but I loved the line about Dean ordering Sam inside with a look. Nice work. |
 Tidia 2009-03-31 . chapter 1 Sam dropped the bag off his shoulder and looked down at the sickly yellow polo-shirt and tan pants. He brought up his hands and ran them down the clothing in confusion.
“Doesn’t really agree with your complexion.”
LOL_- LOVED IT
Tidia |
 Lilly B. 2009-03-31 . chapter 1that was a great tag! thanks for writing and posting it! i really enjoyed reading it! |
 Psychee 2009-03-31 . chapter 1The tag was more than okay, I really enjoyed it. |
 pinkphoenix1985 2009-03-31 . chapter 1hon- this is just brilliant!! and I just love how you included the angel talking to Sam as well :D |
 Micaiah 2009-03-31 . chapter 1Awesome job! I would have loved to seen the show end this way. I wanted to see Sam's reaction to what had happened.
“Besides, we still have each other. Apparently even when I don’t know you I can’t get rid of you,” Dean teased in conclusion. Loved this line! And loved the interaction between them at the diner. |
 sammygirl1963 2009-03-31 . chapter 1Awesome tag Tara. It's like you completed the story from where kripke left it off. How I would have loved to seen those scenes on the show...with the brothers gettng back together and bantering back and forth. With Sammy seeing the car that Dean was driving and the boys going to Bobbys!
Fantastic oneshot my friend! |
 Ridley 2009-03-31 . chapter 1 Tara, I think this was an excellent tag. I liked that you gave Sam's point of view and his conversation with Zachariah. I really think that was needed, although knowing how the show's Sam is going, it probably would have fallen far short of the way you painted it. So, maybe it was better we only see it in the hands of fic writers. The Impala with Bobby was a very nice touch. Good to know where Dean's baby ended up. And most importantly, the brother moment was there and that's something I've really missed in the show and have missed writing. It's so nice to see it again. Great work.
Rid |
 Dragonflysoul 2009-03-31 . chapter 1LOVED! Thank you!
“Besides, we still have each other. Apparently even when I don’t know you I can’t get rid of you,” Dean teased in conclusion.
“I’m afraid you’re stuck with me, Dean.”
“Yeah?”
“Yeah.”
AW! |
 SupernaturalGeek 2009-03-31 . chapter 1That was really nicely done.
I think it was telling that, after all the S4 episodes that have tried to show us Sam pulling away from Dean, that when it came to them having their memories erased Sam was the one who held onto something of their relationship. That he was the one who had that insistant feeling that they were brothers even though to all intents and purposes they'd never met.
I think it was as much Sam's lesson as it was Dean's, and I hope they recognise that in the coming episodes.
You had their voices very much in character and there were a lot of lines that made me smile. And this bit, I think, sums up the Winchesters perfectly:
Sam dodged the few fries that came flying his way but he couldn’t keep the smile from his face. Things weren’t perfect, far from it, but right now Sam felt at home with his brother and in return felt at home within himself. And for now? That was more than enough.
Great job :) |
 adder574 2009-03-31 . chapter 1Awesome tag. Worried Bobby is always welcome. I'm glad he had their stuff. I can't wait to read your brohterhood story. |