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| fatdude 2008-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abusenice prolouge/ |
| Fynix 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseVery creative. Definitely the best I've read on this website dealing with Army Men. You went the extra mile to include LEGO and other races of living things, sticking close to the console and PC games. I applaud this effort. Keep writing more! |
| Hawki 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseKind of a case of show rather than tell, since the bulk of it is narrative with only a little bit of persona presence at the end. Still, looks like an interesting concept. |
| Enilas 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is intresting, will you ever write more? |
| Adunaic 2006-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell then. I might first say that you must have a strange obsession with these little toy soldiers. However, I do not exagerate when I say that this is an excellent peice of writting. Your word choice is superb, but is second only to your talents in literacy. you convey everything clearly, and I do (despite the odd nature of your writting) wish to read more. |
| Sarge 2003-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseA good story...but I guess I can't expect any more since this was posted 2 years ago. |
| Soviet 2002-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Sounds very good. I think you should expand the story and give it more detail. Good keep writing |
| CompHQ290 2002-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was pretty good pleas make more |
| Taft 2002-08-31 ch 1, | abuseA exclent bit sized story!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Captin_frye 2002-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was cool |
| Jeff's writrzblok 2001-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI think this is the good start to a nice war epic. Keep up the good work (check out "Army men Purple Rain)lol |
| ShadowCell 2001-12-13 ch 1, | abuse...um...what should I say? |