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Reviews for: His Wake Up Call
allison lightning
2009-12-11 . chapter 1
Because the absolute laa-st thing Perry would ever want is JD to be just like him. Good one shot.
bluegirl320
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Wow!O_O That was so cool. I can just imagine that actually happening. i think Dr. Cox would really react like that. Awesome one-shot!
geminillama
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this; I love the way you write these two together.

I also can't wait to read your 'My Captain' story... I'm saving it as a present for myself when my uni break comes in a few months :D It is going to be the best ever.
andaere
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
Ahh... this is so beautifully written. I can always count on you to write well. :) This oneshot was emotional, subtle, and brilliant. I love it!

P.S. JD's beard bugs me SO much. He's just not JD with a beard. Maybe I can help Dr. Cox shave it off... xD
khwhitelion
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
...too lazy to log in...

oh I liked this!
Exangeline
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
The absolute complexity of what you've presented here is simply amazing. I adore the polemics of Perry and JD's relationship - how Perry has always wished JD to remove the cheery attitude, and that it's only when JD does, and becomes something closer to Perry himself, that he realises he'd do anything to get the old JD back.

I really wish that something like this would occur in the show. I've only seen bits and pieces, but the way they're stomping on their relationship in the latest episodes makes me want to cry. Nobody wants everything to be peachy keen, but they don't want it to be horrible, either. If something like this were to happen, it would go a long way to justify things in a realistic way, and restore at least part of their amazing relationship.

Getting back to your story (sorry for the rambling), this small peice of "late-night angst" never continues to amaze me. It really is a beautiful one-shot. I love how the beard sort of does it for Perry, and brings him back to Season Five when he grew his out, before letting him realise that he really doesn't want JD to end up like him. The emotions you've portrayed in this piece are seriously Scrubs standard. I could imagine this playing out in front of me with the uptmost clarity.

Write on. :]

x
Majestik Moose
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
Nice!
You're kind of my idol in the Scrubs fandom. Your fics are so brilliant and incredibly cute. :P
HarrissBoBarriss
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
That was pretty cool. I wouldn't say it was random at all, it made perfect sense.
Expecting Rain
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
I liked it! I never made the connection between JD's beard and Dr. Cox's beard, but I like how you used that.
GenkaiShinigami
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
Freaking. Amazing.

I love you so much for writing this. xD It reminds me of Their Story II. :P

I love how you put so much detail into your stories, and they just shine brilliantly. ♥ You're such a talented writer and I think you could place yourself in any characters shoes (in Scrubs at least) and pull it off like a pro.
storyshark2005
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
ooh, this was good. I love stories when Dr. Cox has to actually face up to who he is, and seeing JD become him is a hell of a way to do it. I could totally see this as an episode. Very possible.

thanks,
storyshark
funkypartyweasel
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
Wow...this is a really good fic. Very emotional, and I love the last line (Ah, Scrubs-nostalgia-flashback-moment)! (Also, is this kind of what's happening in Season 8? It's only just started over where I live, and it's not on at a good time, so I'm just gonna wait for it on DVD...so yeah. Are they making JD become more like Dr Cox? Gah, I hope there are still sweet mentor/protege moments between them!!) But anyway, that has nothing to do with this fic. Which is excellent! :)
darkorangecat
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
Nice, intense and great to be brought back to the beginning to highlight the changes.
Rasberry Parfait
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
And you've done it again!
You do the best stories with these two. I love it.
FanficAddiction
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
There are SO few brilliantly written Scrubs fics out there, but this was fantastic. I love this, I love the premise, the language, the callbacks. You clearly know Scrubs as a true fan would. More Scrubs fics, please!

Thanks.
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