This is a well written and intriguing start to what promises to be a wonderfully creepy fic. I look forward to the next part!

Good opening. I can't wait until the creepiness starts. :)

Love it!

very interesting take on the whole salvaging of pieces. I've heard of it before but you actually bring emotion to it, rather than it simply being a way of life for a machine based race.

Also...PRowl getting zapped. Epic Win. I have the urge to draw it out as a comic...if I could draw...x.x

You have layed out an interesting start.

I love horror stories. I can't wait to see where this is going.

Interesting. I'm going to guess that this is a type of "ghost in the machine" type of story, although on a slightly different level. Those are interesting, and I will be watching for this story.

Doing stupid stunts in a thunderstorm. Some never learn. That's all I can say about what those two pulled. And I suspect there was a very good reason that Ratchet never saw the body before. See you next time.

Great start. More please?