Mithros, Mynoss and Shakith! This is SO funny! And I haven't even finished it yet. But I can see that it isn't finished (to my great chagrin) Well, if you ever /do/ finish it, then I'm here to read and review it! :D
Warmest Regards,

Nell
P.S. Yes, I agree with you. There are so many cliches!

:D This is great! Please update!

This is hilarioius!1 I havn't laughed like this since... well IDK! YOu can't abandon it!

rofl!

I like it! Some of these cliche's set my teeth on edge, and I like the irony of fixing them by using yet another cliche :)

How far are you planning to go into the books?

Updation...? Please?

ROFL. A lady friend, virgin. Haha. Was Jonathan ever really around that many girls? I guess if it weren't for Thayet he would announced himself gay after Alanna... Lolz speaking of Alanna, "you ruined my dress. PREPARE TO DIE!" Oh, snap.

Alanna of Trebond, the epitome of feminine perfection. Haha. Eww and isn't that incest?

The Tortallan world is very much messed up. I found this particularly entertaining: "The carriage ride turned out to be far from uneventful. They were attacked by bandits no less than fourteen times. Each time Alanna came to the rescue, with her seemingly endless supply of knives hidden in her bosom. Her impeccable aim meant the bandits dropped dead every single time." Lolz, bosom.

Ooh, I can't wait to see how this story goes. Phft Alanna being presented at court? Tamora Pierce as a sorceress. LOLZ.

This is great! It's about time somebody broke up all the cliches in fanfics...

and i went and joined goldenlake, too :)

omg, this was so funny! thank you for having Kat start to straiten out the charecters. Alanna was very humorous, but i think my favorite was Jon - 'physical exertion takes valuable energy away from our minds'! i think it's really neat how you balence the very out-of-charecter (but they're supposed to be) medieval charecters with Kat's 'oh my god what is wrong with them?' modern spin. please update again soon!

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Is there some purpose to having everyone think that Kat and Raoul have an incestous brother/sister relationship?

Or are there more twisty plot things coming up soon?

Because if everyone's going to think they're siblings, I might stop reading the story...

ha ha ha ha ha. drunk Raoul. that is good. hee hee. anyways, this was good, and update soon, but can we please have Kat actually start trying to fix the problems? the story's premise has been set up, but now she needs to start on her quest. and is something else going to happen with Raoul? like, maybe he should stop drinking? i think normally he'd help...if he wasn't drunk...

but, all in all, good. update soon!

you better make sure you link me chapter 3 when its up cos i want to see more :D

haha im glad you linked me this :D very funny!