Oh my gosh, Shugo Chara? x DD

Update again soon please! Loving this story. : D

how is luca i thougt it was ruka

Great, good-written as well, I'm hoping to see more. But for the inspiration.. I'm sorry, but I can't really give you anything since I'm stuck myself.

Wish you luck, and maybe I'll message you when I got something ;)

Wow
Amazingly written :)
I don't have much to say since I didn't really notice an mistakes or so.
If there were any, I probably didn't notice it since when I read, little mistakes don't really catch my eye. But I would notice if there were any grammar errors. And there were none :)
Keep it up,

See yah~

Your style is good, and the dialog is in character (mostly). However, I'm noticing a lack of plot. Their isn't an abiding thread. It doesn't feel important unless there is a reason for each thought and action. You have to pick an idea, a centralized point of view, the captures the most important aspects of your story. And so, I see this really interesting nephew that jumps of the screen, "Hey, I'm fascinating, dating a human, and deep in the pureblood bloodshed." I think he may be your most valuable asset. But, we loose something in the lack of connect between Yori coupldedom and their beginning. So, I guess what I'm trying to say is slow down and develop a cohesive story because you have the chops in terms of skill to make something magical that keeps the reader engaged.

I loved this chapter, too, but on to your plea... I'm not quite sure which one you want more, ideas for this story, or ideas for oneshots, so I'll give both.
For the story: bring Zero back! Find him a girl (or boy)! And find out what happened to Sara Shirabuki, maybe she can cause some drama. After all, in the latest chapters, she's not seeming so innocent anymore. Also, she might try to come between our favorite couple, and Kaname can experience jealous Yuuki, which is always fun.
As for Yori oneshots: maybe a short story on how she met Ryuji? I'd be interested in that, you know, in more detail than in the story. Also, it'd be interesting to hear her thoughts on her best friend being a vampire. Was she afraid, at first? How did she learn to see beyond the beast?
If you ask me, you should do a oneshot on Seiren and her life. She really doesn't get enough attention. She doesn't even have a first name. It's a shame, because she's so awesome. And you could do an angsty oneshot on how Kain (Cain? I don't even know how to spell their names) had to watch Ruka (Luca?) obsess over Kaname, and how they got together after so long.
I hope this helped you! Update fast!

Yeah, writer's block can suck. But it seems that you haven't any with this story, at least that's what I deduced from what I've been reading, because it rocks! I'm so happy he thrilled, I totally squeed when he got down on one knee. Next chapter ahoy!

Hey, I am NOT a stranger. If you ask me, everyone on is friends with everyone else. So forget this "stranger" business. Fabu frufru chapter, babe. You have mad writing skillz. I'm always interested in what the characters are wearing, so thanks for including that. I love the last line of the chapter, it made me laugh!
On to the next chapter!

Jeesh, you should be arrogant, for Salazar's sake. I love the outfit you put Yuuki in, is it the one from one of the covers of the chapter? It sounds like it, and I always loved that one. I'm looking forward to the next chapter... which is why I'm going to go read it... yeah. Great job!

Don't be ridiculous, this fic has a 0 for suckage levels. It's awesome! Well, the first chapter is, at least, I love Kaname and Yuuki together! They're so cute!

please finish the story. it's great! and i, so, love their sweet and romantic moments. it makes me wonder if there really is a guy like Kaname Kuran out there...hmm...Just wondering, anyways, please continue..
ps.it would be bad if u placed this couple into situations that might test their relationship like, "another woman/man"...i hate it when fanfics tend to turn out that way...

lovin the story! cute chapter so I hope you keep writing! um the only thing is right now i'm not to sure how this fits into the overall story but something might happen so i'll keep an open mind.

Well I cant right but an idea for a story might to right about Yuuki on her period and shes either out of tampons or she lost them cause that has to drive the night class crazy

Awesome story, it's rare to find stories with Yuuki as a pureblood vampire, and its also rarer to find good ones that do have Yuuki as a pureblood. Keep up the good work.

hehe! good story good good! XD It's an interesting plot with the Day class knowing the Night class is vampires and i like that Yori is dating Yuuki and Kaname's nephew

The story is pretty good though I'm a bit confused about characters, OCs, and where they came from...