|Reviews for Fracture|
| Kairan1979 4/2/09 . chapter 2
Good insight on Dan's reaction.
Laurie blaming Rorschach for changes in Nite Owl is predicable. I wonder where is she going to live after leaving Jon?
| quantuminferno 4/2/09 . chapter 2
this broken Daniel really is something. It's so... him and not, and I can't even explain myself this fic is so good.
I hope Daniel finds something, and Laurie's POV on Daniel was a great insight to how much he has changed.
| FacetiousDruid 4/1/09 . chapter 2
Great chapter! XD I loved both of their reactions to the girls murder from the new perspectives.
| FacetiousDruid 4/1/09 . chapter 1
I really like it so far and hope you keep going.
| Altariel-Jaina 4/1/09 . chapter 1
Is it bad of me to find this Dan sexier than the real one? Though definitely more unrealistic, he's more dangerous, more broken and more fun, and definitely darker and sexier. Yes
| Lightshade 3/31/09 . chapter 1
This is an interesting idea to be sure, but it could use a little fine tuning. Also, be sure to check that the characters stay in character at all times, as both seem slightly OOC.
| megumisakura 3/31/09 . chapter 1
| nobody in particular 3/31/09 . chapter 1
Huh? Just... Hurm. :/ It sounds rushed, and extremely unlikely. Plus, while Rorschach may not hold back, he isn't exactly a sadist, and wouldn't approve of sodomizing people, of all things. Not with his aversion to all things remotely sexual.
| Kairan1979 3/31/09 . chapter 1
It was really great idea? I guess Blaire Roche case could crack even the idealist like Nite Owl II.
| quantuminferno 3/31/09 . chapter 1
why has no one had this idea before? It's freaking brilliant. And poor Danny, going a little crazy... sodomized? Ouch. Crazy.
I'm officially obsessed with this story now.