Reviews for One Harry Potter, Please
tilly-tally-tease 4/3/09 . chapter 2
Brilliant! On, Draco, you and those wonderful memory charms... wouldn't it be funny if Derek was really just trying to set Harry and Draco up, thus faking being memory-charmed? Ahh, that would be funny.

Just wondering, how long do you expect this story to last?
Miyako Suou 4/3/09 . chapter 2
Oh, they are both so clueless. It's brilliant. Please update soon!
Cathcer1984 4/3/09 . chapter 2
Aw get to the shagging already! lol I know it takes time! i love it so totally cannot wait for the next one!
Poseida Lunar 4/3/09 . chapter 2
Draco... :(
Eternidad Absoluta 4/3/09 . chapter 2
You are awesome! you just became my fav writer lol. great work! Its so cute how cruel you are lol poor guys thinking that the other doesn't love them lol just cute. keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chap. you just made my spring break more enjoyable .
Draggy2 4/3/09 . chapter 2
I must say you are one my my favourite fanfiction writers (left that nice and broad on purpose). Alas, despite the knowledge that the next chapter would soon-be-released I merely couldn't resist the temptation of checking online to see if you had, by chance?, posted more elsewhere.

And you had.

And the story was complete too!

So I got to read your marvelous story whole (which was delightful) and made my day.

Thank you for the writing!

(I enjoyed that Harry and Draco kept misunderstanding each other so completely all the time, how you portrayed Draco in a way that he safely kept himself in denial, and the way you depicted the sex (also I took particular enjoyment in the scene where Draco lashed out and said something to Harry that I confess my mental image of Harry's expression of shock and hurt stuck quite forcefully) so all and all. A great read!

Draggy2
Cathcer1984 4/3/09 . chapter 1
Awesome... I love it, can't wait for the next part!
absence 4/2/09 . chapter 1
I love the direction of this story. You are the best thing since choclate :P
Endrient 4/1/09 . chapter 1
A..Paperclip? gosh Malfoy couldn't you think of anything better!

Great start really looking forward to an update.
kelseymetro 4/1/09 . chapter 1
This is such an amazing story! I always love the Auror fics, but the way you've managed to show the story from both Harry and Draco's perspectives so clearly...well I was wowing, seriously. Well done matey, please update it soon.
Draggy2 4/1/09 . chapter 1
Oh, oh, oh!

I am so loving this story so far. I simply cannot wait to read another chapter *crosses fingers* oh please have one soon.

Eagerly awaiting

Draggy2
crazyvampgirl 4/1/09 . chapter 1
oh good grief- poor harry. poor malfoy, bue especially poor harry. it's crazy how they just manage to so thoroughly misunderstand each other- you portray that very well. this story looks very fun- looking forward to the next chapter, and thanks!
Stinuli 4/1/09 . chapter 1
I love this story! :D

Harry and Draco are both so hopeless and cute.

Your writing is very gripping and the story sucked me in.

Please write more! XD
Tavian 4/1/09 . chapter 1
Oh, how wonderfully marvelous. I absolutely love it! They are both so sadly adorable, pathetic and deserving of snuggles. So many little things make your boys endearing and ridiculous (good lord, a paperclip?).

ah, how easy it is to be misunderstood and perceived incorrectly...

I have now rushed over to your lj to finish this without further unnecessary delay.
MDarKspIrIt 3/31/09 . chapter 1
All that sarcasm will keep them apart! Great start BTW, Can't wait to read more!
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