So I can happily say this is one of the worst stories I have ever had the luxury of reading. Bravo Mayuna - you are a terrible author and it's taken 78 stories for you to not realize that.

Where can I even start? Should I even touch on the subject matter, the ridiculous characterizations ( or lack there of ), how unbelievable it is for Trunks to be thinking that he wants Goten's baby inside of him - have you seen an episode of Dragonball Z in your life or did you just stumble across pretty pictures and decide to rape the characters for your sick fantasies? And yes, it's so convenient to just throw in a plot device that the males can get pregnant if both partners truly want it to happen but then make it so that it's baffled everyone for ages.

A warning that your story is full of squick would be nice.

You should learn how to use grammar and the english language as well. Paragraphs are not meant to be giant blocks of texts to leer oppressively at the poor victim who clicked on your story. Refer back to your elementary ( well, for you, probably was high-school ) english lessons for a refresher course and try again, m'kay?

I am honestly looking forward to reading the next chapter...for some reason this one was lacking in you general luster though. Still good just not as good. But then I guess when your devastated and beyond rage you can't be expected to be your usual self (referring to Goten not you of course.)

Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon.

I love this story so much.

I.Loved.It

This fic is absolutely great ;)

Poor Goten. Well I can't say that I didn't see that coming...but then I could say the same if it had been anyones...your story put a lot of ideas in my head...I can not wait to read the next chapters! This one gets a 4/5

Wow. This is a great chapter. You're such a talented writer. Please keep up the good work and update soon...

You know, I never liked yaoi until I read this story. It's amazing. Please update.

so far I really enjoyed this one, I like how all the character's are falling to their temptations I never really liked the mpreg thing but thats just me so far a very good story keep it up

Great chapter.
I think I know where you're going with the whole "pregnacy" thing, and if my guess is right then PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

So wow...that wasn't the ending I was expecting...will you continue with the Videl Gohan Line...will you keep Trunks faithful...will we find out if Pan is actually Videl's or from the other story you wrote? Is the next chapter up yet...gr get writing dammit... ^_^

How is that Chi-chi is seems less concerned her son is gay than that he may get another male pregnant? This is very good...please keep up with your story's...all of them!

Well congrats on scoring the nine to five. In these times, thats a blessing in itself. This chapter was okay but I didn't expect for you to make Goten so overly-understanding towards Trunks, not only that, but make him forgive Trunks right off the bat and not want to know what he did. It kind of makes me wonder where you're going with this story. But keep up the good work and I'm anticipating the next chapter. Hope there's some confrontation coming up soon... Yay Angst! LOL

This is a really great chapter. Such powerful emotions and I love the physical torment Trunks is going through due to his transgressions; it definitely adds more depth to the story in my opinion. Please continue, I can't wait for Goten to find out and see how you let that play out. MORE!

T_T

Love the story. Keep up the good work.