Takagi's description of Conan makes me think about how outsiders see the boy. Conan can be rather intimidating so it's good that he's a force for good. This was well-written and I love the shinagami line!

This is really well written and makes me hope you write one where Conan and Kenshin meet or even just Kenshin observing him. That'd be cool.

Nice, Kenshin's care for his family is as I always figured it would be, not as that stupid OVA presented it. I consider that a poorly written fanfiction considering it was not written by Watsuki-san. I would love to see the story of how Wataru ended up living with Kenshin and Kaoru, I think it would be a very interesting tail. Thanks.

Interesting...You know, they should make more stories discussing Conan's "curse"..you know, with the death following him and stuff.

i have to say, that part when the two of them were stuck in the elevator and he asked Conan who he really was, that was my favorite chapter of Detective Conan...now if only i could figure out what chapter is was again. Do you know, that would help! Anyway, good stuff, i enjoyed it. ^^

Sidles up to author and gives best puppy dog look. Saitou? Would love to see the snark. Takagi's fellow officers would look at him in a whole new way.

The ki thing also explains how Ai can tell when there is a Black Org member around; the killer intent must be obvious to someone as perceptive as her.

don't know if that's where you want to go with this, but i would *love* to see Conan trying to make sense of Kenshin. also Ran getting advice from Kaoru on what to do when the guy you like goes off on some terribly dangerous case and you don't know if he's coming back . . . . (they really do have similar personalities. if Kaoru weren't still alive in this universe, i'd think re-incarnation.)

thank you for your wonderful imagination, and the skill to communicate it to your readers.

gratefully,
DarkBeta